I decided that a ten chapter mark will be a good celebration to go around with and though about showing my ugly face here again. Or rather, for the first time on this fic. Hope you missed me.
Well, first things first.
THE SHIPPING.
I... don't really know. My body says no, my brain says no, my brain says no, and I say no as well. It makes me cringe, but alas, I am but one ugly retard and I shan't manipulate you to my dastardly deeds and n['eeds. So fine. Move along, criminal scum.
The whole alternate-universe-gotta-go-fast-need-more-vespene-gas-get-more-followers-from-gods adventure is, well, nuts. It is. I fear, with my entire being, that you will loose yourself and fuck up by a margin bigger than your mom's ass. I do fear that you will screw up the story, and it makes me sad, so I beg you, I beg you, my dear moron, to work smart, and not harder, and that the virtues of "Quality over quantity" are to be held in high regard. Don't write just because, and do the same you did with the first story, and instead think in advance on the plot of the story. I seem to be rambling again. Kepling! Bring me more tea!
Oh, and before I forget, you need to get them to skyrim. The Divines are a formidable ally should one swoon them and the Princes and Princesess of the many Oblivion planes are to be not underestimated, as well. Just watch out for Clavicus, he's a sneaky one.
I guess that's all. There are still grammatical mistakes, plot holes so big that the Jupiter's great fart zone seems like nothing, and the usual "what" and "It doesn't work that way" are still here in great numbers, but alas, I only hope you shall focus and stop thinking about cumming inside Rainbow Dash. Priorities, my good sir. Story line first, smex later.
I think you interperate my writting the wrong way. I'm not rushing through these chapters. (1,2,3 were the exceptrions) and I have a solid story line that I even though It doesn't show in these chapters you need to remember this simple fact...
THEY'RE GETTING TO IT!
This is a time where they are practicing their ability to interact with other worlds. Yes I know the whole idea of the fic was to gain gods as allys but you need to realize Rainbow isn't as good as Isis or Puppet Master when it comes to interacting as an ambassitor.
The goal and plot WON'T show until I take care of little things like this. And GOD DAMMIT WHY DO YOU THINK PUPPET MASTER IS AFTER RAINBOW'S ASS!
If you read the story again and ACTUALLY read it instead of fuck around and think (wrong wrong wrong wrong wrong wrong) then you'd realize Puppet Master is not CAPABLE of loving Rainbow Dash or actually screwing her. and you notice that the story doesn't have a 'sex' tag because there won't be any!
I think this is the first time you've actually made me mad :/
I know you comment and point things out to help me in your own way but you need to put asside your assumption that I'm only as good as my writting...I'm not.
This is all coming down to a specific fixed point that I'm planning toward and most of my chapters before then won't expose it all that much until I reach a certain point where the characters start planning things. It will all come together eventually and I NEEEEEEEEEEEEED you to be patient with this.
I'm not going to go from one world to the other within a single chapter ok? A lot of stuff needs to be played out.
First of, I know you are not rushing this. I simply stated the fact of the amount of help would entering the Nirn bring to them. I can read, you know.
And why do I think those two are totally into each other? Well, let's think. Oh wait, there it is. They keep talking to each other about it, openly embrace the idea of intercourse between the two, and Rainbow Dash ( Codename Big, fine, you'll get away with this, ) even got a bloody piece of lingerie. Want more evidence slash proof? But alas, let's say this is just the two bickering around so Isis gets uncomfortable. She's there for those talks, after all.
And Puppet not being able to actually screwing Rainbow? Oh my, are you implying what I think you are, sir? Did you somehow took Master's... junk, away? Oh my indeed,
And also, you are confusing at times. One chapter you state they can't love each other and the other they openly admit to being in a relationship wiht each other. It simply boggles my mind! KEPLING! MY DAMN TEA! I'M WAITING!
Oh, and I'm happy you actualy have the entire story line written down already. A weight off my heart, I guess. If I had any, that is. And I mean the heart part, not the weight.
Also, about you foaming at the fact the story has NOT a sex tag, my good sir, you don't need one. A relationship visible in a story and convinient scene breaks with implying needs not actualy fooling around to show that something happened. And Molag help you should you even write a "sensitive" scene. I beg you not to. Erotica is hard to write and I feel it is not yet time. Not yet. I'm digressing again. Ah, here you are Kepling. I was growing impatient.
Anyway.
I am patient, and do not worry.
Oh, and assuming you are shitcrap at writing just from the stories? Don't worry. I don't think you're shitcrap. Just medicore crap, Cheer up!
So stop foaming mate, give yourself a good wank to relieve yourself of some stress and chill. Here, I'll send you some tea. Kepling is truly a master when it comes to brewing.
Ok yea I've always looked back at the senes where they are 'in love' and the sheer confusing way I'm putting it and I understand your problem. But god damn the way you ask things is not only infuriating but it seems down right degrading :/
I see my stories problems and I am trying to find down time moments to clear them up. As you'd probably very well know I can't just have them suddenly bring up the topic out of the blue or i'd look weird. I actually have a plan for the future that allows them down time without interfearing with their adventures. Given your ability to see things some seem to just miss out on completely (or are too forgetfull to bring it up in comments) I'm sure you'll know EXACTLY what I'm talking about when I get to it.
And yea I missjudged your patients...I mean how could I miss the fact that you take so much time to write what you have to say in big paragraphs like your other comments. Very detailed work too, even if you may not be spending so much time on them as one would originally assume you still at least present it well enough for me to take everything you say into consideration. (totally not whoring)
Although I really don't have much else to say I kinda want to drag out this conversation so I can get away from writting an essay for...*sigh* english. Although I do try to write in my free time today is a little weird considering the amount of shit I have to do. (No reason to tell you this other than procrasternation)
OK I'll be back later to bitch and rant and yell...(at my editor for no aparent reason)
Then I'll cry into his shoulder while he comforts me and then we get to sweet love making...(Totally not setting myself up for a fanfic about ultra and I)
2023010 Unfortunately I've never had the honor to play that game but I've seen enough fan fics and a little gameplay to actually want to put it in my story...of course I'll need an army to beat shit to death ;P
Oh god wolf gear. Don't get the prepare to die edition. Search artorias the abysswalker and you will find out. And you will die so many times that you will cry. You expect him to be a knight in really heavy armor but he fights like a fucking ballerina on steroids.
Love is in the air.
Greetings, my dear faggot.
I decided that a ten chapter mark will be a good celebration to go around with and though about showing my ugly face here again. Or rather, for the first time on this fic. Hope you missed me.
Well, first things first.
THE SHIPPING.
I... don't really know. My body says no, my brain says no, my brain says no, and I say no as well. It makes me cringe, but alas, I am but one ugly retard and I shan't manipulate you to my dastardly deeds and n['eeds. So fine. Move along, criminal scum.
The whole alternate-universe-gotta-go-fast-need-more-vespene-gas-get-more-followers-from-gods adventure is, well, nuts. It is. I fear, with my entire being, that you will loose yourself and fuck up by a margin bigger than your mom's ass. I do fear that you will screw up the story, and it makes me sad, so I beg you, I beg you, my dear moron, to work smart, and not harder, and that the virtues of "Quality over quantity" are to be held in high regard. Don't write just because, and do the same you did with the first story, and instead think in advance on the plot of the story. I seem to be rambling again. Kepling! Bring me more tea!
Oh, and before I forget, you need to get them to skyrim. The Divines are a formidable ally should one swoon them and the Princes and Princesess of the many Oblivion planes are to be not underestimated, as well. Just watch out for Clavicus, he's a sneaky one.
I guess that's all. There are still grammatical mistakes, plot holes so big that the Jupiter's great fart zone seems like nothing, and the usual "what" and "It doesn't work that way" are still here in great numbers, but alas, I only hope you shall focus and stop thinking about cumming inside Rainbow Dash. Priorities, my good sir. Story line first, smex later.
Love,
-Cortex Repository
2030500
I think you interperate my writting the wrong way. I'm not rushing through these chapters. (1,2,3 were the exceptrions) and I have a solid story line that I even though It doesn't show in these chapters you need to remember this simple fact...
THEY'RE GETTING TO IT!
This is a time where they are practicing their ability to interact with other worlds. Yes I know the whole idea of the fic was to gain gods as allys but you need to realize Rainbow isn't as good as Isis or Puppet Master when it comes to interacting as an ambassitor.
The goal and plot WON'T show until I take care of little things like this. And GOD DAMMIT WHY DO YOU THINK PUPPET MASTER IS AFTER RAINBOW'S ASS!
If you read the story again and ACTUALLY read it instead of fuck around and think (wrong wrong wrong wrong wrong wrong) then you'd realize Puppet Master is not CAPABLE of loving Rainbow Dash or actually screwing her. and you notice that the story doesn't have a 'sex' tag because there won't be any!
I think this is the first time you've actually made me mad :/
I know you comment and point things out to help me in your own way but you need to put asside your assumption that I'm only as good as my writting...I'm not.
This is all coming down to a specific fixed point that I'm planning toward and most of my chapters before then won't expose it all that much until I reach a certain point where the characters start planning things. It will all come together eventually and I NEEEEEEEEEEEEED you to be patient with this.
I'm not going to go from one world to the other within a single chapter ok? A lot of stuff needs to be played out.
2030732
Kepling! MORE TEA!
First of, I know you are not rushing this. I simply stated the fact of the amount of help would entering the Nirn bring to them. I can read, you know.
And why do I think those two are totally into each other? Well, let's think. Oh wait, there it is. They keep talking to each other about it, openly embrace the idea of intercourse between the two, and Rainbow Dash ( Codename Big, fine, you'll get away with this, ) even got a bloody piece of lingerie. Want more evidence slash proof? But alas, let's say this is just the two bickering around so Isis gets uncomfortable. She's there for those talks, after all.
And Puppet not being able to actually screwing Rainbow? Oh my, are you implying what I think you are, sir? Did you somehow took Master's... junk, away? Oh my indeed,
And also, you are confusing at times. One chapter you state they can't love each other and the other they openly admit to being in a relationship wiht each other. It simply boggles my mind! KEPLING! MY DAMN TEA! I'M WAITING!
Oh, and I'm happy you actualy have the entire story line written down already. A weight off my heart, I guess. If I had any, that is. And I mean the heart part, not the weight.
Also, about you foaming at the fact the story has NOT a sex tag, my good sir, you don't need one. A relationship visible in a story and convinient scene breaks with implying needs not actualy fooling around to show that something happened. And Molag help you should you even write a "sensitive" scene. I beg you not to. Erotica is hard to write and I feel it is not yet time. Not yet. I'm digressing again. Ah, here you are Kepling. I was growing impatient.
Anyway.
I am patient, and do not worry.
Oh, and assuming you are shitcrap at writing just from the stories? Don't worry. I don't think you're shitcrap. Just medicore crap, Cheer up!
So stop foaming mate, give yourself a good wank to relieve yourself of some stress and chill. Here, I'll send you some tea. Kepling is truly a master when it comes to brewing.
Love,
-Cortex Repository
2030810
Ok yea I've always looked back at the senes where they are 'in love' and the sheer confusing way I'm putting it and I understand your problem. But god damn the way you ask things is not only infuriating but it seems down right degrading :/
I see my stories problems and I am trying to find down time moments to clear them up. As you'd probably very well know I can't just have them suddenly bring up the topic out of the blue or i'd look weird. I actually have a plan for the future that allows them down time without interfearing with their adventures. Given your ability to see things some seem to just miss out on completely (or are too forgetfull to bring it up in comments) I'm sure you'll know EXACTLY what I'm talking about when I get to it.
And yea I missjudged your patients...I mean how could I miss the fact that you take so much time to write what you have to say in big paragraphs like your other comments. Very detailed work too, even if you may not be spending so much time on them as one would originally assume you still at least present it well enough for me to take everything you say into consideration. (totally not whoring)
Although I really don't have much else to say I kinda want to drag out this conversation so I can get away from writting an essay for...*sigh* english. Although I do try to write in my free time today is a little weird considering the amount of shit I have to do. (No reason to tell you this other than procrasternation)
OK I'll be back later to bitch and rant and yell...(at my editor for no aparent reason)
Then I'll cry into his shoulder while he comforts me and then we get to sweet love making...(Totally not setting myself up for a fanfic about ultra and I)
2023010
Unfortunately I've never had the honor to play that game but I've seen enough fan fics and a little gameplay to actually want to put it in my story...of course I'll need an army to beat shit to death ;P
Oh god wolf gear. Don't get the prepare to die edition. Search artorias the abysswalker and you will find out. And you will die so many times that you will cry. You expect him to be a knight in really heavy armor but he fights like a fucking ballerina on steroids.
2032775 The Rage induced nightmares of that guy man..... I can still feel the butthurt even now.
And Jesus his other hand is dust. Imagine if he had it back. OH GOD he wold be able to rip through your player like butter.
The way you explain his heart and love and everything, he can't love her back.