Oh, No!
The mane six (Not including Pinkie) had organized a meeting to discuss there friends strange behavior at Twilight's library. Pinkie had been upsetting other ponies around ponyville. Knocking over stands, ruining projects and such. Strangely, AJ and Fluttershy were the only ones of her close friends that she had visited.
"It was just so rude of her." Applejack was saying. "I need those apples to live on, she can't just go around eat'n them."
"And it took me so long to gather the bunnies." Fluttershy added softly.
"And after everything she did she always said that Gilda did it?" Twilight asked, even though she already knew the answer.
"That's right." Applejack said "Pinkie kept insisting that it was Gilda's fault even though Gilda wasn't any were near my orchard."
"Pinkie did mention something about Gilda." Fluttershy said. "But I was to concerned on getting the bunnies to really hear her."
Twilight sighed, this had been the story all the time. Pinkie would do something rude and then claim that Gilda made her do it, even though the griffon was no were to be seen.
"Me and Gilda were napping on clouds all afternoon." Rainbow piped up.
"Wow Rainbow." Applejack clicked her tongue in disappointingly. "Your friend from when you were a filly comes to visit again after you had a fight and all you do is nap."
"Hey! That's just what we like to do to relax." Rainbow defended herself.
"Can we get back on topic please?" Twilight asked. "I thought Pinkie didn't blame Gilda for being rude anymore."
"She doesn't." Rainbow insisted. "I mean come on! Pinkie threw her a party for crying out loud."
"Then why is she trying to blame Gilda for her upsetting everyone?" Twilight countered.
"If her goal IS to frame Gilda she's doing an absolutely horrible job at it." Rarity commented."Doing mean things and then saying someone else made her do it is not very convincing. Pinkie can be scatter brained sometimes but she certainty is not stupid."
"You're right Rarity," Twilight agreed, "but I don't see how Gilda could be making Pinkie do anything. How can someone make somepony eat something?"
"Well, Pinkie did say that Gilda ate my apples, not her." Applejack admitted. "But Pinkie had an apple in her mouth, I don't see how that ain't enough evidence."
"I for one believe Pinkie."
The five ponies turned to face the voice, Spike was standing there, apparently listening to there conversation.
"This is Pinkie Pie we're talking about." The little dragon continued. "She wouldn't do anything that she knowingly will hurt someone and, like Rarity said, she isn't stupid." Spike then walked off, having spoke his mind.
The ponies sat there in silence, contemplating this thought before Rainbow muttered, "Well, I'll talk to Gilda about it."
The other ponies nodded, "And we'll keep a watch on Pinkie." Twilight said. They then closed the meeting, each going home to think about their pink partying friend.
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"Hey Gilda!" Dash called when she spotted the familiar griffin sitting on a cloud relaxing.
"Sup Dash." Gilda greeted.
"Can I talk to you about something?" Dash asked.
"Sure, what do you want to talk about?"
"Pinkie, you see......" Dash told Gilda everything Pinkie did and said. Gilda stiffened up for some parts, but by the end was looking calm and cool. Rainbow guessed the stiffness was because she was shocked that Pinkie would blame her. "So do you know anything about it?" Dash finished.
"Nope." Gilda replied, she thought for a moment before continuing. "I don't know what to tell you Dash, your pink friend and I never really saw eye to eye. Maybe she's just hoping to give me a bad name."
"Maybe," Dash said uncertainly "It just doesn't seem like something Pinkie would do. Actually nothing she's been doing lately seems like something she would do."
"Listen Dash, don't sweat it. I'm sure she has a good reason for doing everything." Gilda chuckled "at least that's the case for every level headed pony and griffon. Who knows? Maybe Pinkie's delusional."
"Delusional?"
"Ya, like she's seeing things or something."
"Pinkie can act crazy sometimes." Dash admitted. "No pony ever knows what she's talking about."
"Right, you can just wait until she gets over whatever she needs to get over." Gilda said happily "In the mean time you've got me for company. I might not be as hyper but I think I'm cool enough."
"Ya, you sure are Gild." Rainbow replied, "But still, I just can't shake the feeling that something is off."
"Just chill Dash, come on let's do something to get your mind of it. Bet you can't circle Ponyville twice and come back here before I do."
Rainbow narrowed her eyes, "You really think you can beat the best flyer in all of Equestria?"
"Never no till we try."
"Oh, it is SO on!"
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Pinkie was in her bedroom, sulking. She didn't usually sulk but Gilda had gotten her so frustrated. The griffon kept hauling her off and making it seem like she, Pinkie, was doing really mean things. The worst part was, no one believed that Gilda made Pinkie do it. Why would the party loving pony ever do something mean and harmful? Sure she played a few pranks now and then, but they were always harmless.
Stupid Gilda Pinkie thought, now because of her everyone thought Pinkie was some crazy maniac. Wait was that rhetorical? Or is the word redundant? Pinkie thought about that for a while and other random things until she heard a knock on her door.
"Pinkie?" Came the voice of Mrs. Cake, "We have to go make a special delivery. If the twins wake up please look after them."
"OK. Mrs. Cake, I will!" Pinkie called back, when she heard the hoof steps get softer she went back to sulking. The Cakes still trusted her, that was good. Pinkie Pie would hate it if she lost the Cakes trust.
There was a sudden knocking at the window. Ether Pinkie hadn't heard it or she chose to ignored it, she was pretty deep in sulking right now. The knocking continued but Pinkie Pie didn't get up. She just sat on her bed, staring at the wall. It wasn't until the window swung open did the pink earth pony leaped to her feet.
She started looking for a place to hid, anyplace. Pinkie new what was coming, and did not want to do it again. She couldn't find anywhere good to hid though and so just she backed up into the wall as towering figure approached her and a menacing voice said "Hey dweeb, ready for more?"
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Got a chapter with more then 1000 words!
And I still got to do the cliff hanger I wanted.
Twe....TWENTY PEOPLE HAVE FAVED THIS! AND IT'S ONLY BEEN UP FOR A DAY!
Ermagherd, all the words! And it gets better!
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It's really a thrill the first time you notice one of your fics quickly gets many views. I don't really care how many views my stories gets, I just write them for my own enlightenment on how to be a better author and to get other's opinions to help the progress of said enlightenment.
Thought, if one seeks to attain a high number of views, my tip is; Write clop, it attracts views like moths to a flame.
For example;
Before I uploaded my stories to this site, I was uploading them to an other site.
First, I had two fics which in a month got like 100-150 views each.
Then I upload my first clop-ish fic which breezes through and pass my other fics' view count and gain a whooping 300 views, IN. A. WEEK.
Here on FF, that same fic has an unrivaled viewcount of 729 when my other fics only got like ?<250 views with the exception of one having 490.
One of your earlier comments;
Sorry if I ask, but are you TRYING to get the chapters short? If yes, then DON'T.
When I was writing my first fic that I uploaded to FF, I had a chapter which should focus on my OC and Rarity. Ended up focusing my OC and Lotus for the most part. That whole scene that I at first didn't really want to have there but somehow ended up keeping, was at like 2k words, making the entire chapter at ~3k words.
The whole sauna scene (yes, sauna
) don't actaully contribute THAT much to the story itself (IMO) but I don't think it's wrong to have it there, so I thought, ''Why not''. So I just left it there for shits, kicks and lolz. And nobrony has the very least complained about it. ''Don't fix what ain't broken'', right?
On another note; I gotta go take a shit, later!
1456652 what about all the Fallout story???
i think it will end 2 way's one frd's find out what she doing and say you know what you 2 are even now, or they kick her ass and she go away forever, i want the 1st one becasue i like that idea better
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I'm not trying to make the chapters short, but it's really hard for me not to, and (I feel like an idiot) what exactly is a clop fic?
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You shouldn't feel like an idiot for asking.
''One should not be faluted for being brave enough to question.''
Beisdes, ''One who asks a lot gets to know a lot''
Moving on...
A ''clop fic'' is an MLP:FiM related fiction containing sex scenes, whether it is betwen two (or more
) canon character, two OC's or even if a human is involved. As long as at least one MLP:FiM related character is in that fic, it's a clop. Even if that character is just trembling in a corner while two humans goes at it.
To go deeper (HA, seewhatIdidthere?), the word ''Clop'' comes from the word ''Clopping'' which basically means ''Fapping to MLP related characters''
Another way of specificaly describing a ''Clop Fic'' is an MLP:FiM fiction written to be used as a source of arousal or just rudely ''fap material''.
I've written two stories that can arguably be called ''clop fics''. But my Intentions (HA! I'm scoring high today!) were never for them to arouse others, or myself for that matter. They were solely written to express some sorta depth of the relationship betwen my OC and Derpy.
Gilda: KILL IT WITH FIRE!
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Then I will never write a clop fic! I HATE those sex stories, so no clop fic for me! Those things scare me!
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No killing. I don't like killing ether. So if you wanted something gory, this is not the right story!
1463658 Aww...I'm not in the Cupcakes part of Fimfiction...jk
It's a meme.
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Scare you? How? Ok, that the clop fics can get a bit... erm... extreme... if it's written by a good writer.
But scary? Hmm... I feel sumthin' bein' amiss.
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Confession, I'm not an adult.
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Hmm... I see. My bad.
aww i was going to suggest keeping him out of the loop about clop (for a prank or his own good[even though he could have googled it])
well done, not only is this chapter longer, it has an overall better quality and it was unexpected that Gilda's making pinky do it, i expected it to e like a werewolf thing where gilda takes pinky's kindness while pinky takes gilda's bullyness
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putting it lightly <insert if you know what i mean .gif> dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
1467767 How old are you then?
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I don't want to revile that. Sorry.
1500829 No big deal. If you are younger that is cool. You are a really good writer. Looking forward to where you take this story.
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Thanks!