Well now this has caught my interest. I love crafting stories. Wonder if hes gonna make golems?

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That is a possibility. After all, he can forge whatever he creates in his mind.

This promises to be very intresting indeed.

For who I believe English is not a first language, from someone who can recognise some minor faults only, due to not being all that good at expressing myself, and missing and extra letters here, and maybe the use of GDocs, google write etc, that has problems allowing other sites to post their text unaffected, this has some very nice basis to start with.

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Id you are referring to the way that Xargan, Apple Bloom and Applejack are speaking. I am intentionally mispelling certain words to emphasis on their accents. Zargan's being close to heavily scottish and the sisters having their southern drawl.

Love it so far. Typically don’t like the anthro stories but this one caught my eye.

Well then, not many Dwarven fics here. I quite like where this is going so far. Dwarves with guns, even better!

And of course, he ends up dragged into its problems when all he wants to do is live in peace and work hard and honestly.

And now, it would seem that curious souls are now coming to investigate..or possibly steal.

Zargan must step out into this new world and make a name for himself. A dwarven craftsman who simply wants to live a good life while working away. At the end of the day, all he wants is a belly full of mead and a hardy meal, knowing his creations will serve a proper purpose. But will he get dragged into this land's wars on both sides? Will they try to demand of him? While he is a kindhearted man, he is no stranger to conflict. Physical or otherwise.

Oh brother, there's always damn conflict from heart-rotten characters in here.

Welp, there are gonna regret it by taking a bullet to the face/head, or crushed by his hammer.

Dwarven craftsmanship tends to be a lot heavier than what folks can normally handle.

...He may be in for a surprise. Her brother once towed a house of its foundations and her sister caught a giant boulder.
This plus further confirms my hypothesis that their friendship will be based on mutual crafting skill.

He seems a bit quick to promise to train her.