This feels like when a fallen empire in stellaris awakens.

A rewrite.... interesting, I actually read the original and the sequel to the original and finished both stories and was sad that the sequel was never completed and the entire story was left unfinished.

I really hope the same thing doesn't happen to this story.

However I do have 1, very important question, why the heck didn't Twilight use her magic and teleport away, like what is up with that? Chrysalis just randomly goes behind Twilight, throws her, and she doesn't do anything? I think it should have started off with either putting a magic inhibitor ring on Twilight's horn or completely shatter it and than Chrysalis continues to torture Twilight. Unless teleporting doesn't exist in this Alt universe?

I like the designs for the princesses, but is it just me or does Celestia look too young. Sure Luna could pull off the look, but Celestia is supposed to be more of a mature woman look I feel like. That look makes her look like someone in her 20s, 30s at best

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Teleportation requires focus, she couldn’t teleport at first because she was dazed from being slammed into a book shelf and later was in too much pain to focus on teleporting.

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Ya I do agree with that a little.

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I'll probably mention this in an upcoming chapter to clear up that confusion.