An HIE / Anon x Rarity / Nightmare Rarity story, retelling the situations that lead up to a surprisingly merciful Nightmare Rarity, and how two opposing souls found common ground.
I understand your hesitation about writing sex scenes. They pose challenges to even the most seasoned writers. How do you write a scene without being cliché and still move the story along? At the same time, how do you fit all of it into your story in a natural way that doesn't feel forced? It's not easy.
But I'm going to be upfront about my opinion: you have nothing to worry about.
The scene was beautiful, steamy, hard, soft, loving, sensual, and lustful... somehow all at the same time.
You conveyed how much her heat drove her wild, how much restraint he used while handling her and himself. The care he put into the act. The feelings they both experienced, not just the emotions, but also using their sense of touch, sight, smell, and sound.
The scene as a whole was excellent. But there is some very bad news: you now have no excuse not to include scenes in your other M rated titles.
I understand your hesitation about writing sex scenes. They pose challenges to even the most seasoned writers. How do you write a scene without being cliché and still move the story along? At the same time, how do you fit all of it into your story in a natural way that doesn't feel forced? It's not easy.
But I'm going to be upfront about my opinion: you have nothing to worry about.
The scene was beautiful, steamy, hard, soft, loving, sensual, and lustful... somehow all at the same time.
You conveyed how much her heat drove her wild, how much restraint he used while handling her and himself. The care he put into the act.
The feelings they both experienced, not just the emotions, but also using their sense of touch, sight, smell, and sound.
The scene as a whole was excellent. But there is some very bad news: you now have no excuse not to include scenes in your other M rated titles.
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Achievement get! It's not a lie!
This was a very successful experiment. You did an amazing job, and I hope you feel confident in doing more of this in the future!