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Don't you think your being a bit premature? Were only three chapters in.
Monk
"if Celestia is the nation’s mother, then Luna is its bitter aunt who hangs around renaissance fairs and World War II reenactments." -Some Dickhead (authors actual name)
I really wish that when Authors do crossovers that they add the sentence; "This is a crossover with [Harry Potter, LOTR, Overlord, Deepthroat]," to the description. It helps the reader decide if they want to read it.
Monk
"You had a therapist once, and she made you stop coming after you told her about your childhood. Apparently she just didn’t need that kind of negativity in her life." -amphetanon
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Before I read, can you tell me what this crossover's with?
Don't be afraid to spoil me
A little Nigel I have with this chapter: I feels like the story is beating the readers over the head with “he has issues/ let me show you. This feels strange, for someone who has suffered a lot you would think he would try to avoid talking about them and or trying to avoid people finding out.
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You do make a good point. I can change it quite a bit, but the encounter will happen very differently. Therefore causing the chapter to be a bit on the lame side, but since you feel that the character is not acting as he should, I will make the change.
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My point was that we should be warned upfront what the crossing property is. Me for instance, I have never once read a single star wars or power rangers crossover with FIM that was even worth using as wrapping paper. So, if I come across a story and it has the courtesy to tell me its a star wars cross, I know to just skip it and move on. There are other properties where readers cant stand the characters, like the Twilight books, movies. (Not the unicorn, the sparkling vampire one) No one wants the nasty surprise of reading three quarters of a chapter, only to realize you're reading sparkling vampires.
Monk.
"To be honest, hormones have the backing of countless generations of evolution; thus, they can and will trump common sense or even self-preservation with disturbing regularity." -Dogger807
11739651
Just answer the question, what does this crossover with?
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If you don't intend to read it, WOW.
Never played WOW, but I'm mostly sure its WOW. Yep, WOW.
Monk
“Her hands were still bound with rope, she debated an escape before all the stupidity gave her an aneurysm.” -Scarheart
11739659
Ahh thank you. I was worried it was hairy potter or something like that
I always hated those movies
There, the newly partially rewritten chapter 3 has been re-published.
Isn’t it his second kiss? Windego spirit wife getting no love