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I do apologize for any problems or inconsistencies in this story, so please let me know and I will do my best to fix them.
11737188
i just want chapter 3 :)
11737468
I second that:D
Also is this story in second person or first? With the backstory and personality the protagonist has, and the lack of a second person tag, it looks a first person story. But when the story refers to the protagonist, it refers to him as “you” so that makes it a second person story.
Can you clarify for me please?
11737704
Good question, as I don't really understand the difference between second person and first, but I was just planning on writing this story so that it would help the reader feel like part of the story. Which is why I used 'You' instead of I, but I did just look it up and I should put a second-person tag on it.
Kind of buns me out there's no love for romance in this one but still a good story so far
11737841
...not yet anyway lol.
11739644
No no it is your story if you feel this is important then keep it. this is just some thing that I thought was a bit odd.
11739726
It's alright, what you said really did make sense to me once I thought about it some more. I will have to try harder to convey how Arthas (Blistering Blizzard) is coping with the nightly visits of reliving his past crimes.
11737841
What do you mean? He got married already.
11737704
Yeah I was going to bring this up as well..
Author you keep switching back and forth between 2nd person and 1st in the same scenes when you both mention the MC and write from the perspective of the MC.