Married couples trying new things isn't bad. But sometimes the rabbit hole is deeper then you think. Shining Armor is stuck as a mare for a year until he finds a way to change back. Will he be able to reclaim his position? His wife? His own life?
Well she is just a bitch, she did all this to herself and now she is blaming shining like he has control of all the new and funny hormones, and then the slut instigates it even more!
cadence is 100% gonna mess something up here. she is princess of love who doesnt understand she did this to her husband so kinda seems her manipulations and magic isnt as good as she thinks. perhaps the shining she makes herself is not going to be what she wanted
This so insane and off the rails and the way that Cadance's decisions and mindset kind of make absolutely no sense but she's still unstopplably getting her way is great.
Kind of just want to watch Ritz be an utter hot douchebag forever, but the rapid, needless cruelty of his fate and getting to see that was really nice too.
Excited to see more! Definitely much darker than I expected, heh, very impressed.
Mannn, I was expecting things to go dark but Cadance painfully pulling a the child outta shining and then just as painfully putting it in someone else was not on my fucked up bingo card. I dunno where this is gunna go, will shining succeeded but then decide to nope outta there. Will she fail and get sold off to the Zebra king. I think my preference would be she fails, just Cadance decides to keep her around, as a personal maid and maybe a new plaything for whoever the “new shining” is.
Either way this was pretty fucked up, cool read but ducked up lol
I was expecting dark, but not this dark. I always suspected that Cadance was fucking Ritz, that was no surprise, and I was just expecting Cadance to have Ritz fuck her in front off and essentially NTR a helpless Glimmer. What I was not expecting was for Cadance to be so vindictively over-the-top to an insane and cruel degree. I almost don't want to continue out of fear of how depressing the rest of the story will be. I can handle dark and hot in equal amounts, but I guess I didn't really heed the warning as this really is just dark.
... okay. Fucking Ritz in front of Glimmer? I expected that, a little. I did not see the linked book twist, so that was definitely a surprise, though I guess I should have suspected something. But...
Ripping the baby from her womb, reverting her to a teenager, having Ritz rape her, and then threatening to take away all her memories and send her to be a concubine?
I'M SORRY, WTF?!?!?! Shining, I need you to report abuse on your sociopath of a wife!
You know, I'm kinda surprised no one asked if this is Cadance or if it's like Crysalis in disguise, planning to take the empire over from the inside or something messed up like that. Everyone is so sure it's Cadance and she's nutterie than squirrel shit and a total sexual deviant and a monster.
I'm glad you all are enjoying it. It's just about over, but thank you all so much for following my story this far. You've all helped me to improve as a writer
Well she is just a bitch, she did all this to herself and now she is blaming shining like he has control of all the new and funny hormones, and then the slut instigates it even more!
cadence is 100% gonna mess something up here. she is princess of love who doesnt understand she did this to her husband so kinda seems her manipulations and magic isnt as good as she thinks. perhaps the shining she makes herself is not going to be what she wanted
Damn Caddy was a psycho all along. I mean she could have just stopped this at any point and everything would have been fixed.
hot hot hot hot hot
This so insane and off the rails and the way that Cadance's decisions and mindset kind of make absolutely no sense but she's still unstopplably getting her way is great.
Kind of just want to watch Ritz be an utter hot douchebag forever, but the rapid, needless cruelty of his fate and getting to see that was really nice too.
Excited to see more! Definitely much darker than I expected, heh, very impressed.
Mannn, I was expecting things to go dark but Cadance painfully pulling a the child outta shining and then just as painfully putting it in someone else was not on my fucked up bingo card.
I dunno where this is gunna go, will shining succeeded but then decide to nope outta there. Will she fail and get sold off to the Zebra king. I think my preference would be she fails, just Cadance decides to keep her around, as a personal maid and maybe a new plaything for whoever the “new shining” is.
Either way this was pretty fucked up, cool read but ducked up lol
I was expecting dark, but not this dark. I always suspected that Cadance was fucking Ritz, that was no surprise, and I was just expecting Cadance to have Ritz fuck her in front off and essentially NTR a helpless Glimmer. What I was not expecting was for Cadance to be so vindictively over-the-top to an insane and cruel degree. I almost don't want to continue out of fear of how depressing the rest of the story will be. I can handle dark and hot in equal amounts, but I guess I didn't really heed the warning as this really is just dark.
... okay. Fucking Ritz in front of Glimmer? I expected that, a little. I did not see the linked book twist, so that was definitely a surprise, though I guess I should have suspected something. But...
Ripping the baby from her womb, reverting her to a teenager, having Ritz rape her, and then threatening to take away all her memories and send her to be a concubine?
I'M SORRY, WTF?!?!?! Shining, I need you to report abuse on your sociopath of a wife!
You know, I'm kinda surprised no one asked if this is Cadance or if it's like Crysalis in disguise, planning to take the empire over from the inside or something messed up like that. Everyone is so sure it's Cadance and she's nutterie than squirrel shit and a total sexual deviant and a monster.
I'm glad you all are enjoying it. It's just about over, but thank you all so much for following my story this far. You've all helped me to improve as a writer