Married couples trying new things isn't bad. But sometimes the rabbit hole is deeper then you think. Shining Armor is stuck as a mare for a year until he finds a way to change back. Will he be able to reclaim his position? His wife? His own life?
Mostly that it would be a dramatic increase in scope to introduce an accessory character for Lily with no relation to the story so far — and furthermore, if it was a new character, you would have just named and described him on the spot, rather than leaving vague unspecified "hot pegasus".
Still, exciting developments. I hope they all get to share!
Mostly that it would be a dramatic increase in scope to introduce an accessory character for Lily with no relation to the story so far — and furthermore, if it was a new character, you would have just named and described him on the spot, rather than leaving vague unspecified "hot pegasus".
Still, exciting developments. I hope they all get to share!
So was it obvious that Lily was going to look up with Turbulance? Did I keep it so vague that it was obvious something like this would happen?
I had a suspicion that it was Turbulence, but it was just vague enough that I didn't feel too confident to call it out.
Can't wait to see what happens next!