Lost to his new world, a man tries his best to survive with the foundations laid by a strange empress and a looming unease the world feels. Will he truly rise above his former life or will he simply fall to the darkness below?
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I personally liked this chapter quite a bit, it just felt short thats all.
Good slice of life chapter and a lil plot development, now I just need more twilight intentions and il be satisfied, I mean "burden with deaths" touch sounds ominous. Almost I'm guessing she's metaphorically called that like cadence is the bloody empress despite not being bloody?
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to answer this tell me this, if you were given a crown and a kingdom you had no wish to be given what choice would you have but to be burdened with that simple answer of being the ruler, doing your best for your people believing its the best chance you have at getting what you want.
For the question about the nightmares, a nightmare from what I know is unique to everyone so the best examples being daybreaker and nightmare moon are a clue as to how a nightmare for cadence would work. you'll see in time. Her parents and the many mysteries of how this world haven't quite literally fallen apart will be answered in time and I appreciate the comment about the grammar/puncuation, always an issue on my end so I'll do my best to improve that.
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Being burdened with something is something that no one wants to bear so in this case being told you are burdened with deaths of those around you is simply a thing that will happen or something that you can't change about yourself.
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On the note of her checking on someone, when you can sense the emotions and love of all beings in an unknown radius a new signature much less one alien to you is going to get anyone curious so while its not said directly the courts and most of her staff consider her weird for this move.
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its always good to improve grammar but id take his criticism with some salt, I mean "distractingly poor" ? I very much disagree. even so you get you point across and convey the story in a interesting manner, you're doing your job right as they say imo.