Lost to his new world, a man tries his best to survive with the foundations laid by a strange empress and a looming unease the world feels. Will he truly rise above his former life or will he simply fall to the darkness below?
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11621660
To answer you properly, while that can appear how it is. I think as the author I can accurately say that order is just a fine line between chaos and nothing. you'll see what I mean later
11621470
nothing happens, in any case, no matter how much spirit you have, you must imply (at least some difficulty) that it is not a body even similar to a human, we are talking about a race of prey or technically herbivores in dangerous situations, the soul and body of the protagonist will be in Disorder
11621688
Well that's kinda the point, his soul and mind are messed up and its going to remain that way until he finds some way back or comes to terms with his new existence and how that's done, well if you do read you'd see but I won't ask that of you.
I am enjoying this now to wait patiently for more. Keep up the good work my friend.
11621936
I very much appreciate that, love that you're enjoying this work so far
I wonder if his magic will specialize at affecting his own body? It would explain the self levitation.
11622097
Seeing as he's not discovered his talent or proper magic, keep in mind the world is an alternate universe so the types of magic one can specialize in are key to talents.
11620512
I see. Well thank you for the answer.
I think i will pass on this story. Honestly no point of making a "Human in Equestria" story if the character is not even human. At least to me anyway.
Also been lied to before about such changed only being temporary, so yeah.
Anyway, i wish you all the happiness with this story.
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Always happy to help and it's no problem, not every story can please everyone and that's ok! I hope you have a good rest of your day!