Good one with the name

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You still haven't answered my question?

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I am confused, the only thing i registered as question in the comments was the 'plotholes things'. The comment section of the story has rather detailed listing i wrote that need changes since they make no sense to me.
Like the Nobel mare that literally openly talked about high treason etc etc.

Or to you mean the thing about Cynder literally having a weapons on her tail with enchantments breaking effect etc?

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To be more specific, I'm pissed at Celestia's thinking over here;

Should all this fail, would she take the burden upon herself to end this poor victim of somecreatures experiments, as to end its threat suffering from potential mutations making it life one of suffering.

Cynder is FINE! That's just the way she is, she isn't some disgusting mutant experiment from Resident Evil or something.

And second;

Why do they think the displaced Cynder as some sort of depraved experiment of a unknown evil?

Well, they are technically correct. Considering with Malefor from the canon games. Or more specifically, the Displaced Merchant.

They do realized that the "perpetrator" for Cynder isn't even from Equis/Equestria in the first place. And they can't even get to the Displaced Merchant anyway.

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Dragons have natural weapons. Perfectly in sword shaped and enchantment destroying swords tip tailed are not one of them...
Later they discover Cynder dark magic nature.
Thanks to Nightmare Moon changes in my story and bullshit magic reason in harlock5399 story, is it dark neutral and even feeding on other dark magic, dispose of the threat and strengthening the dragon.

That is reader knowledge. Displacement, being reborn or the Merchant existance and nature are unknown to anyone outside other Displaced.
Cynder still don't know jack about Displacement and their abilities. For all Cynder knows, she died and got reincarnated. End of story.
All the displacement and MLP stuff comes up later.

By the way, did you can recommend some Displacement Authors who don't go Son Goku levels of world ending powerlevels? I need some reasonable level of strength kind of Authors.
harlock5399 is already OP as buck... I will tone my powerleveld waaay down...

Cynder and Celestias sisters got a one of a kind show that day, since she was kinda still clinging to the head of Celestia while she was riding the Tarterus out of the poor stallion.

Oh please have this be brought up with twilight and get her reaction

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Why do you think i had Cynder still there?
One if many examples to shiw that Celestia might be a powerful Alicorn and a major ruler in the national stage, but also a passionate mare.