"They got in the way of progress." Well that's definitely a motive, for who/what I couldn't say, but I'd hazard to guess a pony. Why else kill the monsters (including Sweetie Belle) but leave the 'normal' ponies alive?
Also, orange? Green is easy: changelings, yellow implies many things, purple is dark magic, but orange? I've never heard of orange being featured as magic before.
Well seems that the gang managed to save the day, Spike coming in for the save was a nice touch .
I'm excited to get some more answers concerning AJ next chapter, hopefully we'll finally learn how she got this curse. Though there are so many other questions that can be answered, now that the wolf is out of the bag .
I am slightly disappointed, that the one breaking into the castle turned out o be the vampony's minions after all at that even after meeting Trixie they were able to execute their mission so easily. But I guess it makes sense considering Trixie's character that she just would not care enough to really look after the two . Still, there was so much opportunity .
Finally, the main villian of the story decides to introduce him/her/itself to it's future opponent and victim. Orange seems to be the new black, as this new dark power really shackes up the villian industry, going colorful instead of the usual eerie black. While a bold fashion choice it certainly seems to pay of. For their intrduction they go with a classic, the nightmare within a dream, you thought you'd woken up from. Can't go wrong with that.
Now will we learn more about this foe, other than that it's really old and has very powerful servants in the vamponies we've met? At some point hopefully. After all if it's that old surely Celestia and Luna have heared about that little Sauron wannabe .
I forgot to mention to you all that I recently decided this story will come in sections and even sequels this will help facilitate the creation of more stories and give me time to work out the rest of the story, all to provide you all with premier entertainment.
Does that work alright or should I just go as I have been?
"They got in the way of progress." Well that's definitely a motive, for who/what I couldn't say, but I'd hazard to guess a pony. Why else kill the monsters (including Sweetie Belle) but leave the 'normal' ponies alive?
Also, orange? Green is easy: changelings, yellow implies many things, purple is dark magic, but orange? I've never heard of orange being featured as magic before.
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Well seems that the gang managed to save the day, Spike coming in for the save was a nice touch .
I'm excited to get some more answers concerning AJ next chapter, hopefully we'll finally learn how she got this curse. Though there are so many other questions that can be answered, now that the wolf is out of the bag .
I am slightly disappointed, that the one breaking into the castle turned out o be the vampony's minions after all at that even after meeting Trixie they were able to execute their mission so easily. But I guess it makes sense considering Trixie's character that she just would not care enough to really look after the two . Still, there was so much opportunity .
Finally, the main villian of the story decides to introduce him/her/itself to it's future opponent and victim. Orange seems to be the new black, as this new dark power really shackes up the villian industry, going colorful instead of the usual eerie black. While a bold fashion choice it certainly seems to pay of. For their intrduction they go with a classic, the nightmare within a dream, you thought you'd woken up from. Can't go wrong with that.
Now will we learn more about this foe, other than that it's really old and has very powerful servants in the vamponies we've met? At some point hopefully. After all if it's that old surely Celestia and Luna have heared about that little Sauron wannabe .
I forgot to mention to you all that I recently decided this story will come in sections and even sequels this will help facilitate the creation of more stories and give me time to work out the rest of the story, all to provide you all with premier entertainment.
Does that work alright or should I just go as I have been?