"I am in love. So deeply, happily, wildly in love that I do not know how to withstand its might. All I wish is for her to be happy. Yet I am so certain that I have ruined everything."
I'm enjoying your writing style, though I'm not sure how to describe it. The adjectives Quirky and Eclectic come to mind, but they are hardly specific enough to convey the sense of what I find to be of note in your words. It was the long sentences in particular -- neither run-on sentences nor awkward, they had an intriguing grace to them. Can a pony call a sentance 'lithe'? Do you want example of what I am reacting to? Your second sentence,
The evening was on the edge of the horizon and ready to usher in the end of the sunlit hours, multicolored gleams of light pouring across the clouds as obscured sun sank through the clouds to find its slumber.
Long. Lithe. Liked.
BTW: parchment is animal skin. If you want to poetically call a writing material a "thin leaf of wood", then the word parchment does not fit.
Also, you said,
And a special shoutout to those who follow me just to downvote. That's dedication!
I'm enjoying your writing style, though I'm not sure how to describe it. The adjectives Quirky and Eclectic come to mind, but they are hardly specific enough to convey the sense of what I find to be of note in your words. It was the long sentences in particular -- neither run-on sentences nor awkward, they had an intriguing grace to them. Can a pony call a sentance 'lithe'? Do you want example of what I am reacting to? Your second sentence,
Long. Lithe. Liked.
BTW: parchment is animal skin. If you want to poetically call a writing material a "thin leaf of wood", then the word parchment does not fit.
Also, you said,
Is that a thing? LOL, some ponies are funny.
Ooh, that sex scene at the end... so hot! And i did love how Celestia took pity on Cadance.