Given another chance at life, Gabriel was brought into a new world and given a new role as the world angle of death. But this world doesn't take too kindly to something born in the darkness.

Well too bad! He is a Angel of Death, what are they gonna do?

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Take lifes that had lived for too long

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Does that include a certain couple of immortals?

Good start let's see what happens next

You have him as the "Angle of death" in your long description.

You mean "angel" right?

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...I won't lie, I like the sound of a man with a Geometry Book walking around calling himself 'The Angle of Death'. Sounds like a good Comedy waiting to happen.

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Yeah I went to go see if I was spelling angel right but no I was spelling angle. But I am too lazy to change it so

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HAHA, GEOMETRY TEACHER TURNED DEATH'S EMISSARY, LET'S GO!

you need to get someone to edit/proofread your work
plenty of sentences are awkward, your text is in massive blocky paragraphs, and the dialogue feels stilted

“Don’t fear the reaper”

-Blue Oyster Cult

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Cancel him on twitter.

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They don't have Twitter.

And if they somehow have that terrible site, then they deserve to get reaped.

When next chapter coming up? I hope it long story.

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I would but I am currently trying to get through high school. and it is not going well as I have credit recovery online and it is hell like fuck

I don’t want to be rude but can I get a status update on this story?

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I honestly am working on updating this story and you can talk shit man I DO NOT GIVE A FUCK. But yeah High school keeps getting in the way, but I am working on a new chapter so