Reluctant Prey

What do you mean by that?

11286931
It's a pretty common tag on eka's. The best way I can describe it is like making a kid go on a rollercoaster that goes upside down for the first time. It looks like fun but you're scared.

...Huh. No idea why I read this, but it was surprisingly cute.

But why the Porn Tag and Mature Rating? Sure It's vore but there aren't any mentions of sexual-related nonsense.

11286982
Better safe than sorry. Haven't been posting long enough to push limits.

Pretty good story man, a few grammatical errors, mainly missing apostrophes in contractions like can't. There is a missing space after a period and hammock is spelled with a c instead of a k in some parts.

But overall it's a nice story, I look forward to seeing more.

11292565
I'm trying man but proof-reading is a bitch. Glad you still enjoyed it though. It was a blast to write.

11293238
I bet. And I'm glad you had fun writing it

If this were The Elder Scrolls Starlight would have put all her points into destruction and mysticism. It was exhilarating to watch a master of illusion perform right in front of her.

I dont even know what to say to this line.

It's a decent story, but you gotta stop expecting everyone to know the same references you do- when reading the story hinges on them, it's not a great way to incorporate them. Write references so that they dont stand out unless the reader is a fan.