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She just said she doesn't know what the ultimate power is and now suddenly she knows?
Dare I ask how could insults kill someone?
What does that mean. After what is done?
Armwrestling isn't all about strength. Proper technique is more important.
Man I feel sorry to anyone who try to armwrestle Knuckles
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Alright, answer to your first question is she still does not know what the ultimate power is. What she said was just a guess. She believes it is an artifact, but she isn't certain.
Answer your second question is insults do not actually physically kill you. That was meant to be a metaphor. That was probably a poor attempt at it, but whatever. It is what it is.
Answer to your third question is what I mean by after it is done is this important task she has ahead of her, trying to become friends with Caleb. Of course, she probably wouldn't complete it anyways because she would realize it was too difficult and give up. But that doesn't really represent Twilight's character and it wouldn't be a good story if that were the case.
Answer to your final statement is Knuckles knows that arm-wrestling is not about strength. He is at master level in several different forms of martial arts, so he would know that pretty well. He would combine his strength with his techniques in order to defeat Applejack at arm-wrestling. Spoiler: It would easily be a one sided match. It's probably the most unfair match that you would ever see, but that's the reality of it. Feel free to ask me more questions if you have any.
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Yeah, it is not pretty if anyone tried to do that. Any form of combat, Knuckles would easily dominate in with no problem at all. Even without the Master Diamond in his possession, it would still be an unfair match and he would soundly defeat Applejack with ease. That could appear in the story at some point just for fun, but I'll have to see where I can put it in the story if I decide to do that. The moral of the story there is don't try to beat Knuckles in anything because he'll do that to you in a matter of seconds.
My issue was the paragraph which shows her perspective in third person lists specifically what it is when she shouldn't know. It would be more fitting if it was changed to either a vague artifact or simply "Ultimate power" Seeing those paragraphs saying what her perspective is list what it is just takes me out of the story which is a problem.
Yeah it failed since I don't even know what insults is even being compared to.
Spike statement makes no sense. If he won't make her quit why would achieving the task make her do so. Why would she give up when she achieve her goal when it means the opposite and if she doesn't it makes his statement a moot point. When someone asks for clarification they mean to make it easier to understand not harder.
What does Knuckles' knowledge on that fact have to do with Applejack and Rainbow's exchange? Nothing so I don't know why you brought it up but cool to know I guess
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Alright, I'll review it to see if it needs to revised a bit so it can make more sense, but I'll have to see what I can do. I figured that was probably a terrible metaphor, so I'll probably have to reword that as well. The entire point of Spike's statement is to show Twilight that Knuckles is a very stubborn individual and it would only be a matter of time before she eventually gave up because of how difficult it is to deal with him. That could use some better wording as well, so I'll try to rework it a bit so it makes more logical sense. The exchange between Applejack and Rainbow is a bit more complicated to answer. Knuckles really doesn't have any sort of knowledge of this exchange, but he could beat Applejack in arm-wrestling if he was challenged to it. I'm sure that's quite obvious and I probably don't need to repeat that. So, I'll go ahead and try to add some revisions in there so it can make more sense if it is required. I apologize if things can get confusing at times.
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To be honest I felt that was a jab from Rainbow at how she beat Applejack that one time at it or a part of her statement at least. I only pointed out the it being more about technique due to Rainbow not knowing so and thinking it's all about strength.
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You would be correct. As we have seen throughout the show, these two are very competitive against one another. So any chance they get to one up each other, they'll do it. In this case, Rainbow is just trying to gloat that it's about brute strength when in reality, it's more about technique. So, the point is Rainbow doesn't seem to understand arm-wrestling as much as she thinks she does. But, that's what happens when you have a massive ego and get very prideful a lot.