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If you are going to pull is he dead or not trope, you shouldn't have made responses to comments saying he is going to do something he hasn't done yet, It's like either you already revealed the answer and he comes back somehow or you were lying when you made those statements. Which either means what is supposed to be a suspenseful part of the fic is foiled due to that, or you mislead us and it doesn't paint a good sign towards trusting you when you make promises.
Can you clear something up did Tirek actually stolen the alicorn magic or not.
Also amazing chapter by away
Здравствуйте Microsoft _2016 как у вас дела и всё удачно и я хотел бы у вас спросить вы когда ни будь смотрели фильм гладиатор от режиссера Ридли Скотта снявший когда то культовую франшизу (Alien с переводом на русский означает чужой) вот и я и подумал может вы когда нибудь закончите над этой книгой и создате новый кроссовер и соучастием/переплетения фильма с мультфильмом видь одним из главных героем является генерал(ныне бывший)Максимус и принцесса дружбы(ныне бывшая)сумеречная искорка станут гладиаторами и выходить на арену и мне этот исторический фильм мне очень понравились и хочется посмотреть на этот кроссовер Microsoft_2016 пожалуста ответе мне на мой вопрос я буду ждать.
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It was supposed to be suspenseful, but I put it like that so that you could start to think and speculate what truly happened before it was eventually revealed. The story is far from over and we still have a lot left to go. This event will be explained in a later chapter.
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No, Tirek did not steal the alicorn magic. Before he could do so, he got shot by turrets in Knuckles' personal vehicle, so that created a distraction. After Knuckles talked smack to him, he was solely focused on destroying him and the Mane Six instead of trying to absorb their power. That's all.
11349452
Except I can't when in responses to comments to me and a few others you reveal you plan to have him doing things he hasn't done yet, revealing that he is going to survive so it's not suspenseful. Unless you were lying when you made those responses which is worse. You can't have your cake and eat it too. Either he lives which you already reveal due to again revealing things you are going to have him do, or you were lying to us and your promises aren't happening. Which is it? Pick one, because you can't have both. My point is pretty simple so I don't see how you are missing it.
11348223
Нет, я вообще не смотрел фильм «Гладиатор» и не собираюсь делать по нему фанфики. Возможно, когда-нибудь я посмотрю фильм, но пока это не входит в повестку дня. Итак, я надеюсь, что ответил на ваш вопрос, и если у вас есть еще, не стесняйтесь, дайте мне знать.
11349457
I never did say he was going to survive. I said he could have. I was hinting towards it, but I did not confirm at all. There is a difference between the two, you know. You'll just have to wait until later chapters come out for you to find out whether or not he did survive.
11349455
Thanks I like that better than home stealing the magic I hate it when that happen and I call it it was in tree of Harmony can't wait for next one.
11349463
Yeah, you were correct in the artifact being where the Tree of Harmony was, but a little known fact about it is in that world, it only reveals itself whenever Knuckles is around. That's why no one else saw it when they were in there. Great things are in store for this story and more is to come.
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Maybe not directly, but saying things like he is going to do chores and get back into their good graces implies that he does. So, again either you were lying about that happening or again you indirectly reveal that he survives with your responses. That's it plain and simple. Either you were misleading us or your suspenseful moment falls flat. I will wait and see to see which is it, but know your attempt failed at least on me.
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Okay, I see what you mean. But I was saying that because it would be bad PR for Knuckles to almost attempt murder on Rainbow Dash and then completely go unpunished after being swept under the rug. So, that's probably an area I need to improve in. But, that's the point of learning. You get better at it as the time goes on.