Honestly, this isn't the worst fic out there by any stretch of the imagination. Decent writing, very minor grammar nitpick, the only issue I have is how the story is all 'tell' and no 'show', I.e., how you're supposed to 'show' the audience what's going on instead of telling them.
I just got kinda curious about why this is so heavily downvoted and decided to give it a quick skim-read, and while feet are from my kind of thing, there isn't anything inherently bad about this story. Most people are going to find it extremely bizarre, sure, but that's not the point.
Honestly, this isn't the worst fic out there by any stretch of the imagination. Decent writing, very minor grammar nitpick, the only issue I have is how the story is all 'tell' and no 'show', I.e., how you're supposed to 'show' the audience what's going on instead of telling them.
I just got kinda curious about why this is so heavily downvoted and decided to give it a quick skim-read, and while feet are from my kind of thing, there isn't anything inherently bad about this story. Most people are going to find it extremely bizarre, sure, but that's not the point.
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Thank ya.
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well it is incomplete i wonder if there are more chapters?
I enjoyed this, barring a few minor spelling mistakes. I hope you continue!
Really good
Minor spelling errors aside
I liked it