A mare prostitute (female OC) from ponyville wich was born in relative poverty, one day meets a young adult drake by fates whim and her life since then will change forever. Where will the ramifications of this event lead to?
Not bad, is English a second language to you? I ask because English does not use upside down punctuation at the start of sentences. Also you had cartoon box’s in your story that were likely cardboard boxes and her department was probably an apartment. But all that said still it’s pretty good.
11267182 Yeah, im a native spanish speaker, so sorry for any language mistakes. Also, yeah i meant to put apartment and cardboard box, probably at the moment my mind did not think of the proper words. Might correct it later. Happy you like it so far. Will try to upload as soon as i can. Also, ¿any feedback or "2 cents" you can give?. Since this is my first story im thinking perhaps im rushing things, i tought about starting to introduce the Mare OC with actual clop with clients before eventually the thing with the religious extremist stallion. Might put some of that later as flashbacks or something though.
Not bad, is English a second language to you? I ask because English does not use upside down punctuation at the start of sentences. Also you had cartoon box’s in your story that were likely cardboard boxes and her department was probably an apartment. But all that said still it’s pretty good.
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Yeah, im a native spanish speaker, so sorry for any language mistakes. Also, yeah i meant to put apartment and cardboard box, probably at the moment my mind did not think of the proper words. Might correct it later. Happy you like it so far. Will try to upload as soon as i can.
Also, ¿any feedback or "2 cents" you can give?. Since this is my first story im thinking perhaps im rushing things, i tought about starting to introduce the Mare OC with actual clop with clients before eventually the thing with the religious extremist stallion. Might put some of that later as flashbacks or something though.
My Spikey would never use such language...
Yea, I was taught better then that
Bastard? Really?