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For me, it was pretty well choreographed and told me a pretty good picture of what was going on during the battle. A lot of details like of how the guns were fired and hit their targets, how the magic users used their magic to create and maintain the magical shields to protect the crewmates. Well done WildWPony, well done. Also, I'm surprised, not in a bad way, that you decided to have Chrysalis change and become good. You've done a good job describing how she was, I want to say tricked by the Tree of Harmony to give love and become good. I'm pleasantly surprised how you did that. Good job. By the way Wild, are you ever going to have Sunset Shimmer come back through the mirror and make up with Celestia before this story is over? (And possibly have her somehow fall in love with Emmit and maybe join the herd like Novo?🤞🤞) Either way, you've done a great job with this chapter and story overall. Stay safe and keep up the great work.
Thanks for the chapter! I really liked the battle scenes, your description of the events was good which helped to better imagine the unfolding of the scene. Then:👍
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Sure she was tricked onto a better path but that doesn't mean that the tree didn't have a good reason considering that the queen might have made the difference in the fight.
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Thank you so much for that. I'm glad you think I did a good job on the battle scene.
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Thank you for saying that it was good. I am always asking for others to let me know how I write.
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