Great chapter again. Still loving the party dynamic.
Both the dialogue and exposition (in snappiness, creativity, & comedic timing) are a joy to read. Razor in a group setting makes for some good entertainment. The casual tie-ins with the original work fit in nicely as well.
‘I understand. I’m sorry. Please take a muffin.'
My heart ached a little at this part. Definitely got my "d'aww" in for the day.
Roulette continues to pull a dorky smile out of me every time she's on screen. Her "ahyup," "torture scene," and "landmine incident" in particular.
The "subtlest magic," indeed.
Watching Razor slowly shed some his rigidity has been fun as well. Traveling with other ponies really does make a difference, it seems. (Friendship is magic & the like.)
Finding myself looking forward to seeing where these three end up next. Wherever it is, though, I'm sure it'll be quite the ride.
Great chapter again. Still loving the party dynamic.
Both the dialogue and exposition (in snappiness, creativity, & comedic timing) are a joy to read. Razor in a group setting makes for some good entertainment. The casual tie-ins with the original work fit in nicely as well.
‘I understand. I’m sorry. Please take a muffin.'
My heart ached a little at this part. Definitely got my "d'aww" in for the day.
Roulette continues to pull a dorky smile out of me every time she's on screen. Her "ahyup," "torture scene," and "landmine incident" in particular.
The "subtlest magic," indeed.
Watching Razor slowly shed some his rigidity has been fun as well. Traveling with other ponies really does make a difference, it seems. (Friendship is magic & the like.)
Finding myself looking forward to seeing where these three end up next. Wherever it is, though, I'm sure it'll be quite the ride.