It's really cool feeling to see new FoE fics being written, even a decade later. The concept of a prewar black ops soldier is one I'm excited to see explored.
A really enjoyable first couple of chapters. The minimal dialogue and somber descriptions really set the tone.
Some particular bits I really enjoyed:
Some, however, pushed into the darkness for their own gain, their own vanity. The fog of war hides many sins, and even great injustices can be rendered invisible. (Chapter 1)
Such a great line. Really clinches that prologue.
Better.
Yes, better. Wait. What? Never mind, get out of the base.
Really enjoying Razor Wind's internal dialogue. The discussion. The confusion. The occasional snarkiness. (Very nice.)
Half the floor consisted of blocks of cubicles, all fairly identical with desks and chairs and terminals broken up only with scatterings of personality now faded and peeling. A poster here, a figurine there, one had a stapler attached to the desk with heavy duty bolts and the word ‘MINE’ engraved on the top.
The little details you slip in there really make the scene. (The bit in the hanger as well.) Reminds me a lot of the storytelling Bethesda tries to do in the mainline Fallout games.
It's really cool feeling to see new FoE fics being written, even a decade later. The concept of a prewar black ops soldier is one I'm excited to see explored.
A really enjoyable first couple of chapters. The minimal dialogue and somber descriptions really set the tone.
Some particular bits I really enjoyed:
Such a great line. Really clinches that prologue.
Really enjoying Razor Wind's internal dialogue. The discussion. The confusion. The occasional snarkiness. (Very nice.)
The little details you slip in there really make the scene. (The bit in the hanger as well.) Reminds me a lot of the storytelling Bethesda tries to do in the mainline Fallout games.
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Thanks for the comments, it is greatly appreciated.
'Really enjoying Razor Wind's internal dialogue. The discussion. The confusion. The occasional snarkiness. (Very nice.)'
Heh, there is a reason he has such an argumentitive internal dialogue...
Should have some more going up soon.