This was a fun chapter through and through. Really enjoying the back and forth between these three. (Roulette's ridiculous in all the right ways.) Looking forward to seeing how their relationship evolves.
The Selenite discussion was fun blend of laughs and lore. And the whole warehouse scene *really* nailed that Fallout feel and imagery.
The combat bit was well written and well paced, too—you could really feel the intensity as the scene played out.
This was a fun chapter through and through. Really enjoying the back and forth between these three. (Roulette's ridiculous in all the right ways.) Looking forward to seeing how their relationship evolves.
The Selenite discussion was fun blend of laughs and lore. And the whole warehouse scene *really* nailed that Fallout feel and imagery.
The combat bit was well written and well paced, too—you could really feel the intensity as the scene played out.
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Thank you for the kind comments,
Roulette is... Yeah, she's just kinda acting out on her own with minimal directing from me I think.
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The best response.