Actually, you're writing has gotten better from the beginning. With any fic there tends to be a little bit of a rough start with grammar, phrasing and the like, but you've been improving with each chapter. Honestly the only problem I can think of at the moment is that the chapters are pretty short, other than that
1425277 Yeah and i'm just thankful I got it done. Did it all in under an hour and that's a new record to. Oh and thanks again for commenting and takeing the time to even read this.
1486979 Well, if you have any friends on the site you could ask them to help spread word about your fic. I know that in "Red Thrush HighSchool" Azurini (the author) has links and suggests to go to his friend's fic "Trips into the Unexplored" and vice versa. That seemed to help with the popularity of both fics.
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dat ending
1425051 thx for the comment and for trixie but dont worry happy and maby daw moments ahead. Plus is there anything i need to work on?
Actually, you're writing has gotten better from the beginning. With any fic there tends to be a little bit of a rough start with grammar, phrasing and the like, but you've been improving with each chapter. Honestly the only problem I can think of at the moment is that the chapters are pretty short, other than that
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Agree^ You've gotten better with your writing. Still some spelling mistakes, but overall, pretty decent plot so far.
1425350 hur hur hur you said plot
But anyway I like it so far dude you have grown alot as a writer since your avp fic keep it up dude!!!!!!!
I was wondering about this fic earlier today and thought maybe you gave up. Hooray for being wrong!
1426753 Yep and if u want to help in anyway give me some ideas? or even advice would really help out.
1425277 Yeah and i'm just thankful I got it done. Did it all in under an hour and that's a new record to. Oh and thanks again for commenting and takeing the time to even read this.
1305984 no that was me fuckers are lucky i didn't bring out the ripper
1425277 hey just a quick question. You have any idea how i could get inside the whats hot list?
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Well, if you have any friends on the site you could ask them to help spread word about your fic. I know that in "Red Thrush HighSchool" Azurini (the author) has links and suggests to go to his friend's fic "Trips into the Unexplored" and vice versa.
That seemed to help with the popularity of both fics.