I have a few more chapters actually written, and an actual story to go with this. Should I continue it? The "end" here is more of a beginning. The other chapters might have "hot" porn, even if the content is intentionally vile. I didn't want the first section here to be hot though, so it's kinda weird and gross. Sorry about that. It was a conscious decision, but probably not a good one.

Yes please. That would be nice.

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Neat. I didn't think people would like this. I'll keep working on it then, and get the rest presentable. Thanks for the comment!

Ooh, this was great. I too would love to see more, please.

This was a really gripping read! Great work ^^

I’m gonna like this. Seems interesting.

You should totally continue the story

Hmm... perhaps the other chapters would be best presented as a sequel? So this could be the end, or not.

This is rad, it’s insanely gross really gripping in a strange way. , I wanna see how this plays out

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Will do! Thanks!

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Thanks! That means a lot coming from you! I love your stuff!

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I don't know, Bride of Sombra, I feel like this might be stepping on your toes.

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The story continues... for now. The question is how far to drive this train. The end goal was not a pretty place.

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That's a pretty decent idea. I think I want to continue this part of the story from within "this" story. There is another part that would be more interesting with a "protagonist" swap, and that might demand a new story.

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When I first started writing this, I wanted to make it an enemies to lovers thing. You know, like "The Hating Game" or something. But I didn't make the situation amenable to that, and I realized it wouldn't work at all. So I figured a more grimdark/gross perspective on it was appropriate given the characters that I ended up writing. I re-wrote the two cups chapter to make it explicitly not sexy, and more just wrong. I might put actually pornographic scenes in later, but even if it happens, Twilight will be a slightly different character by then... and that's more the story anyways. Thanks! I'm glad you were at least marginally entertained. I'm really surprised this has a positive rating at all given the content. lol

Gross? Nonsense! This fic is FLAWLESS!!! This is totally gripping!
Continue writing the blood! It makes this perfect. Along with the hotness!
LONG LIVE TWIBRA!!!