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hmmmm... first person with I cliché. But It could be just me though.... Good story so far hope that other chapters will be in later on. The last part makes me remind me of this though...
Peace is a lie there is only passion, through passion I gain strength, through strength I gain power, through power I gain victory, through victory my chains are broken, the force will set me free.
Unlikable narrator narrates unlikably.
Great story
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...I'm pretty sure it shouldn't count as a cliche to use a first-person perspective. Like, just by default, you're kinda limited to three options there. It's okay to just dislike first-person stories(?) I suppose, but that's not a cliche.
11317387 for my plans for this story I figured first person would work best. I might have another perspective in an omake/spin off type chapter, but it won't be a regular occurrence.
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