i feel the laughing and smiling is od at times. as there is more way to formulate your words out. like chuckles, grins, smirks, nods,
to exspand the exsperience more then making your steve look like a psykopath lauging at nearly anything. an robotik in beheavior. but the world building is intresting so far, but there is still detail aspekt for timing for some things to make it work out more.
oh and before you post might be a good ide to go thouth the text onece again for errors fixing or have someone help with the editing
Something about a water tower mob grinder the lads built years ago? The flowing water in the top pushes the spawning mobs to the centre, which is a tower tall enough to break the mob on hitting the floor? You can build it as different cave levels completely underground or even in the center of a castle tower, keep?
I can't wait till Steve gets Looting & Fortune III. Don't forget the iron golems & the snow golems. Iron for close combat, and snow for ranged combat. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Hey this is good keep up the great work hope to see a iron golem soon that be cool
i feel the laughing and smiling is od at times. as there is more way to formulate your words out. like chuckles, grins, smirks, nods,
to exspand the exsperience more then making your steve look like a psykopath lauging at nearly anything. an robotik in beheavior.
but the world building is intresting so far, but there is still detail aspekt for timing for some things to make it work out more.
oh and before you post might be a good ide to go thouth the text onece again for errors fixing or have someone help with the editing
I am a dwarf and I'm digging a hole Diggy Diggy Hole.
great chapter
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Something about a water tower mob grinder the lads built years ago? The flowing water in the top pushes the spawning mobs to the centre, which is a tower tall enough to break the mob on hitting the floor? You can build it as different cave levels completely underground or even in the center of a castle tower, keep?
The dogs are going to have to learn that not all Pony’s are bad, otherwise their numbers will dwindle without the help.
So dear Author, when is this set? I saw mention of Discorda defeat but that has happened three times.
Also do you plan to have him seek out more ponies?
Great story so far hope to read more of it
Can become a great story
Hey is this story dropped?
Please continue the story it's really gooood
I can't wait till Steve gets Looting & Fortune III. Don't forget the iron golems & the snow golems. Iron for close combat, and snow for ranged combat. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Really interesting, I'm eager to see what you have planned.
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