Steve the miner
written by Asher Blade
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Ah, it's gonna be one of those stories. An Interesting premise i say.
Do you like my sword sword sword my diamond sword sword you cannot afford for for my diamond sword sword
Okay so first, Amazing Premise! I am loving it!
Now a few tips, first is that Spell Check is your friend! I noticed quite a few typos that spell check should have caught.
Second, Wall of Text. The best way to avoid this is to space out your writing into paragraphs, each paragraph being a certain amount of sentences long (for me I do three to six sentences per)
Other than that and maybe some pacing issues, I will definitely be keeping an eye on this!
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"And Even If you Could Could, I have A Patent..."
Safety torch!!!!
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Ah, People of culture! I miss the days of tobuscus!
I think you forgot the word hearts.