To read or not to read. That is the question. This is probably one of three foalcon stories I consdered reading. Good job on that description.

I'm a little confused. I could have sworn that Shining Armor did not have a cutie mark in chapter 1 and now he does? Did he get it when he defended Cadance or is it a typo.

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Uh-oh... Yeah. That was an oopsie.
We went back and forth on that, and apparently I didn't check quite thoroughly enough to make sure it was consistent after all the editing was said and done. Fixed now, I guess.

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I do seem to have a talent for getting people outside their comfort zones...

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I wasn't trying to call you out of it. I have 3 stories of my own in the works and the only reason I haven't published any of them yet is I've seen critics rip stories apart for inconsistencies. I love the story.

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Oh, by all means, rip things apart. That's how things get better! ^.^ Gotta have a thick skin if you want to be a writer.