Cracks to Gravity Falls

by Gfmlp

01) Looking at a New World

They were all looking through the mirror at Twilight.

“How did she get there?” Shining Armor asked.

Suddenly, Princess Cadance appeared somewhat injured being accompanied by Royal Guards.

"Princess Celestia we found Princess Cadance in the brig," said a Royal Guardsman.

Shining Armor immediately went to check on Princess Cadance and realizing that she was fine, she decided to continue watching Twilight through the mirror.

"Well done," Princess Celestia said, and immediately afterward she continued to stare at the mirror.

"What's going on here?" Princess Cadance asked seeing everyone here looking at the mirror where Twilight appeared.

"I have no idea what's going on either, can someone explain to us?" Rarity asked.

"If we assume that the one who impersonated Princess Cadance told the truth, what sucked Twilight in was a portal and sent Twilight elsewhere," Princess Celestia said feeling very guilty for not believing Twilight, then continued speaking. "We have to be vigilant to go looking for her as soon as we know her location."

"Well, the closest thing I can see to where Twilight is is the Everfree Forest," Applejack said.

Rainbow Dash hearing that decided to go to the Everfree Forest, she was about to go out to look for Twilight, but they stopped her.

“I said it looked like, not that it was the place! I hate to admit it, but we need to know more about where she is to go looking for her,” Applejack said.

Suddenly they saw a creature that they had never seen in her life and it approached Twilight.

...

Dipper and Mabel had been sent to Gravity Falls for a summer vacation with their great-uncle Stan, who had turned his cabin into a tourist trap, which he called the Mystery Shack.

Dipper was walking in the woods when he heard a noise and saw a purple pony sleeping near where he was, Dipper wondered who would paint a pony that color and looking closer he realized it was a unicorn, but wondered why. where he came out, because he was sure that he had just passed near where the unicorn is now and before there was nothing there.

Suddenly, Twilight began to wake up.

"How long have I slept?" Twilight wondered just waking up.

"I don't know how long you've been asleep, but are you okay?" Dipper asked, somewhat surprised that he could speak.

"I'm fine," Twilight said, then she looked at the source of her voice and was surprised to see a creature she had never seen before.

Seeing Dipper, Twilight immediately tried to make a force field to protect herself from her, but the only thing she achieved was that her horn launched some sparks.

Dipper stared at what the unicorn was doing and was pretty sure that what he wanted to do wasn't sparks.

“What creature are you? Also, what is your name? And more importantly, where am I?” Twilight asked.

“My name is Dipper Pines, I am a human and you are in the forest near the town of Gravity Falls”, said Dipper and then continued speaking. "And what's your name?"

"My name is Twilight Sparkle," she said, introducing herself.

Twilight was somewhat confused at hearing the name of the town, because she was sure she had never heard of Gravity Falls before, and the two decided to go to a place called the Mystery Shack to talk.

...

While in Equestria, everyone saw what had just happened and listened carefully to the conversation.

"Princess Celestia, where is Gravity Falls?" Rainbow Dash asked.

“I've never heard of a people called that and I've never heard of a species called human,” Princess Celestia said, very worried that she was beginning to think that Twilight had been sent to another world, but she wanted to confirm that first.

...

Dipper told Twilight about her having a sister named Mabel, when they arrived at the Mystery Shack, Mabel as soon as she saw Twilight, she threw herself to hug her.

"Great a unicorn," Mabel said hugging Twilight very tightly.

"Mabel I think you shouldn't hug her so tight," Dipper said.

"Obviously she likes to be hugged that tight," Mabel said.

“Why don't you ask him?” Dipper said.

Mabel hearing that looks at Twilight curiously.

"You're holding me so tight," Twilight said.

“Great you can talk!” Mabel said.

“Can you let go of me?” Twilight asked.

“I'm sorry,” Mabel said.

Stan, Wendy and Soos saw everything that happened and Stan was happy to use Twilight to attract more children and Dipper explained to Twilight that she was the Mystery Shack.

Twilight and Dipper agreed that they were going to ask each other questions.

Dipper discovered thanks to the questions he asked Twilight that he came from a place called Equestria, that there were earth ponies, pegasi, griffins among other creatures, that friendship was the most powerful magic in Equestria and he had never heard of Gravity Falls and the humans.

Twilight discovered thanks to the questions she asked Dipper that she was now in a world called Earth, that magic did not exist and if it did exist it was hidden, that nature, weather and animals were similar to the Everfree Forest, also that the sun and the moon moved naturally and that the only intelligent beings that could speak were humans.

Twilight when she realized that she was in another world she was very sad. Twilight tried to calm down and began to think about how she got here, because she was so confused by what was going on that she didn't stop to think about how she got here. In doing so she remembered about her brother's wedding and that Princess Celestia and her friends were very angry with her and that no one had believed her about someone impersonating Princess Cadance and she became much more depressed.

...

Meanwhile in Equestria, the mirror was taken to Princess Celestia's castle and everyone was watching what was happening.

Everyone realizing that Twilight was in another world, everyone felt very sad.

"Princess Celestia, can't you bring Twilight back?" Applejack asked.

"I can't do it, it would cost me too much to create a link between that and ours to create the portal," said Princess Celestia.

“Can't you use the mirror to create the portal?” Shining Armor asked.

“This mirror is just a window to another world, and what we need is to create a door to that world,” Princess Celestia said sadly, then continued speaking. "But that explains where the red bolts came from, something had to have tried to connect this world to the world where Twilight is now by force, which ended up creating those red bolts and the portal that took Twilight away."

They all decided that they better keep watching what happened to Twilight.

...

Dipper noticed that Twilight was suddenly depressed and decided to ask her why she felt sad.

"Twilight, why do you seem so sad all of a sudden?" Dipper asked Twilight.

"I remembered that nobody believed me when I told them something very important and then I had a fight with my friends and then I was transported to this world," Twilight said sadly.

All her friends seeing and hearing what Twilight had just said felt very guilty for everything that happened before the wedding started.

"Twilight, I'm sure all your friends feel guilty and miss you," Mabel said trying to make Twilight feel better.

“Mabel, I'm sure they realized I was gone after the wedding was over or bettter thought after the wedding was ruined,” Twilight said.

In Equestria, Twilight's friends agreed with what Mabel said, but felt more guilty for what Twilight had just said.

"Twilight I think you should stop thinking about that fight, because it's making you more depressed than you already are," Dipper said.

Everyone after Twilight calmed down a bit decided to go to sleep, Twilight stayed to sleep in the Mystery Shack, more specifically in Mabel's bed, because there were no more beds.

...

While in Equestria, Princess Celestia decided to speak to everyone present.

"I was hoping Twilight was somewhere in Equestria, but Dipper just confirmed that Twilight is on another world called Earth, more specifically in a town called Gravity Falls, and it looks like the mirror only shows Twilight because she's originally from Equestria." this world,” Princess Celestia said very sadly, then sighed and continued speaking. “I'll start creating a portal where Twilight is and tomorrow I'll move the mirror to the Ponyville library. Today everyone is going to stay in Canterlot to sleep.”

They all went to try to sleep, but deep down they all knew that they would not be able to sleep easily.

Comments

[The Cowardly Christian]

Don't get me wrong this is interesting...but I hope you have a plan to make this story different from your other story...

1. How about when Dipper finds the journal, he finds instructions on how to gain magic and spends the next couple of days focusing solely on helping Twilight regain her magic...the downside is that while he's doing. He's so distracted helping Twilight, he misses the whole thing with Norman....and so Mable ends up kidnapped for SEVERAL days...and is finally forced to escape and defeat the gnomes herself.(before you say boo to this idea, remember how both Dipper and Twilight are defined by their Obsessive compulsive nature. They both literally had an episode discussing this. Not to mention how important magic is to Twilight, with her LITERALLY being the element of magic....I could easily see them ignore everything around them and focus solely on that. Plus Soos and Wendy don't know Mable that well yet, so neither would worry about her being gone. And Stan- let's be honest had a very 'hands-off' approach to parenting...especially if he's using 'the most distracting object in the world'. So I bet he wouldn't notice her missing either)

For the Gobblewonker episode, after being chewed out by Mable for not being there to rescue her- Twilight interjects that although they should've been more attentive, expecting Dipper to always be there for her and bale her out is a rather unhealthy relationship expectation(she recounts how the rest of her family and friends weren't there for her when she needed it the most and now she's stuck in this world by herself). This saddens her friends and family watching through the mirror, Mable realizes Twilight is right...and Dipper warmly comforts her saying HE'LL be there for her and hugs her. This causes everyone to 'AWWWWW'...except Grunkle Stan who shouts 'get a room you two!' Much to their embarrassment.

It then truly starts to hit Twilight she might be trapped here for a while...and she starts to have a panic attack, Dipper- being expereinced with this, having had a fair many himself -tries to help her through it.

Grunkle Stan, was originally planning on a family trip to the beach...but reconsiders it seeing Twilight's panic over the prospect of being trapped here and never seeing her family again- even he's not THAT big of a jerk -but Mable- taking Twilights advice on being more indepednt from Dipper, suggests that she and him go to the beach alone and just leave Dipper to take care of Twilight at the Shack.

(so Mable basically, dose the whole gobblewonker hunt herself to prove she can be independent...even going as far as refuse a boat ride and flat out SWIM to the island...which is a terrible idea which she immediately regrets as she nearly drowns when some rather large floatsom snags on her sweater.)

Anyway, Wendy and Soos- concerned for Twilight- stay at the Shack(and give Themselves more screentime)

When Twilight calms down, one of her concerns is how she's going to afford to take care of herself, as she doesn't want to mooch off the Pines forever OR just be a roadside attraction...

So they discus various ways she can use her magic to make money...

When Dipper hears about how Pegasus make a living, it gives him an idea...and finds a spell in the journal that will give her wings(Soos makes a Red Bull joke, while Wendy makes a crude teasing about how Twilight is doing it all wrong and SHE'S supposed to get Dipper's 'wings' up and running. Much to both their embarrassment.).

The idea, is that Maybe Twilight can sell weather to people...

Anyway, they help Twilight learn to use her wings(a main problem is she keeps trying to be analytical about it, and since there's no way for wings of that size to support a pony, her doubt causes her to crash...and Dipper's equally analytical nature doesn't help, so it's Wendy who tells them they just need to relax and roll with it, EMBRACE the sheer insanity of the situation their in(magic, unicorns, other worlds, etc.)...this finally allows Twilight to fly...she even lets Dipper get on her to fly with her(Wendy again teases how Dipper should at least buy her dinner before he 'mounts' her)

(also during this, Dipper- after Twilight explains more about the Pegasus -points out the hypocrisy of the 'no magic' rule during Ponyville's winter wrap up, as clearly the pegasus are not only doing magic to both fly AND control the weather. But NEED to use it do their jobs! Through the mirror, Rainbow dash realizes he has a point and decides to go make Mayor Mare annul that old law...much to Applejack's annoyance.)

Twilight practices forming clouds and laying on them....during this, Dipper can't help but think of Wendy's words...and he can't help but think of his 'position'...and how much fun he's had with Twilight...and how amazing she is....how majestic...and radiant she looks...and pretty...

And so naturally the universe decides that now is the time for Dipper to have his first boner...which Twilight FEELS.

She so startled by this, it messes up her spell and causes a mystic discharge that gets ride of her wings...which causes her to fall through the clouds and too the ground.

Thankfully, they weren't too high, but it's high enough to cause Twilight to scream in fear. Dipper- acting quickly -twists their position in mid-air so he takes the brunt of the fall...Thankfully, his injuries aren't too bad but they still call it quits for the day to get him tended to...

when asked what happened, Twilight admits she's not sure...but she was surprised by something very tiny suddenly poking her in the back...

Seeing Dipper fluster and flinch at the word 'tiny'...an amused Wendy gets it, but deflects the conversation to be nice...but quietly reassures a mortified Dipper that he'll 'grow into it'.

Meanwhile, through the mirror...the mares- also figuring out - what happened, playfully tease as well...although Shining is just grateful to Dipper that Twilight is alright...

But Celestia meanwhile is surprised by what happened, as while she knew that equestrian magic could make a facsimile of wings that could at least grant flight and cloud walking...but NOTHING that life-like and that could actually grant other ponies PEGASUS magic over the weather...she realizes Gravity Falls magic must be different and wonders if Twilight will become a alicorn sooner then expected...

during the Headhunter episode, Dipper and Wendy focus on Earth Pony stuff as according to Twilight Earth ponies could make huge swooths of crops grow at a fraction of the time humans could....if done right, Twilight would be financially set for life.

Hearing that last bit, Stan eagerly tells them to focus on that While Mable and Soos help set up the wax figures,

They get so caught up in helping Twilight learn this, they miss everything with the wax figures. Again, Mable takes Twilight's advice and decides to solve the mystery herself.)

Again, they use a spell to give Twilight the characteristics of someone she imagines...which is applejack...which gives her a more muscular frame...it also has the side-effect of making her plot bigger and more 'plump'...this again makes Dipper hard...much to Wendy's amusement...especially as this time Twilight notices it...but says nothing, as she too is embarrassed...and not sure how to take it...

While Twilight works on making various potted plants Dipper brought to grow faster, Dipper- desperate to think of something else beside Twilight's jiggling plot and Wendy's ribbing...begins to theorize about other things 'earth magic' could do...

Using various forms of comics and anime as inspiration...they start to experiment...and eventually Twilight gains a crude form of 'earthbending' and manipulating plants to do her bidding...

Getting excited, they decide if they can make a sickly tree become alive, fruitful and fertile again...

And it works! A sickly, old apple tree, WELL pas it's prime...not only is it restored to full vitality, but actually grows BIGGER and it's fertility goes through the roof with an abundance of giant, juciy apples that make EVERYONE mouth water just looking at them(Applejack in particular looks like she's about to have an orgasm).

Twilight is so excited for her succes...she accidnetlly looses focus and cause her sepll to hit Dipper right in his loins....

Before any can react...

RIP!

Not only dose Dipper find his genitals suddenly growing massive, but he's sporting a massive erection. His shorts have literally ripped in two.

Wendy is stunned, Twilight is SHOCKED(she'd NEVER seen male reproductive organs out of a text book, and stallions always kept them tucked inside, never out in the open...)

Mortified, Dipper covers himself with his hat and runs...unitinateionally mooning the girls as he did...

Wendy, not being able to resist, give him a playful smack and shouts, 'BE PROUD DIPPER! YOU'VE JUST BECOME THE ENVY OF ALL GUYS!" She laughs! She then turns to Twilight congratulating her for accidentally discovering a billion dollar patent...and making her summer more 'fun'(that last comment REALLY make her fluster).

When Dipper enters the shack, he finds Mable...covered in bruises and scratches...her clothes ripped WAY post the point of immodesty(this sight thankfully, had the much needed benefit of causing Dipper to 'calm down' in disgust)...using a battle axe to smash the last of the wax dummies to bits...she holds the axe up proudly and shrieks proudly...

They then both see each other...and jsut stare for a moment...

Mable: ...don't ask?

Dipper: Don't tell. (he finishes)

And they both go their separate ways...

Meanwhile, through the mirror. The mares are having a good laugh over what happened.

Candance: Well...looks like Twilight has a LOT to look forward to...

Shining: (groans) Thank you so much for putting that image in my head...

Also, Applejack is amazed at how much power Earth pony's have and plans on seeing if she can replicate it when she gets home...first, using it to get ride of those dang fruit bats...

She also has to finally concede that Dipper is right about the 'no magic rule' being hypocritical and promises to help Dash convince the mayor to annul that law.

Celestia, although amused...further thinks on these developments...Dipper had found uses of earth pony magic even SHE had never thought of...and Twilights causal ability to now use it makes her marvel at how different GF magic is...and how how so much closer to being an alicorn Twilight is...and how she'll be a greater princess then even Celestia ever thought possible...

The hand that rocks the Mable...wraps up much more quickly...

Mable...having had a rough couple of weeks...kidnapped, nearly drowned, nearly eaten by a mechanical Gobblewonker, and nearly being torn apart by a swarm of wax dummies...she's in no mode for Gideon's crap...

So when Gideon and the crowd start to pressure her at the resturaunt start to pressure her....she screams NO!, flips the table and kicks Gideon in the balls....

(in the background we see Dipper Wendy and Twilight working on new ways to use her magic, I'll let you decide what.)

Mable feels terrible about what happened and letting her temper get the better of her...especially when people in town start to see her as a deranged lunatic...

She gets a call from Toby, asking to see Dipper....but Dipper is busy with Twilight, and Mable...still wanting to be independent...goes tot he warehouse instead...

Gideon, not facing forward in his swivel chair...assumes Dipper is here...and begins to flat out accuse him of turning Mable against him and that he'll lock him up and rip out his 'lying' tongue until she 'sees sense'...

He then swivels around and realizes it's MABLE he's talking to...he tries to back track...but Mable isn't having it! She violently attacks him before he can use his bollo to defend himself and beats him up so badly, it's get smashed to pieces....

Overhearing the beatdown that lasts for HOURS, this gets reported to the police, they of course take Gideon's side...and try to have Mable arrested.

But Twilight(who, having seen the commotion as people gather to wonder what the loud beatdown was...comes to her defense...

Everyone is so busy squealing over the cute unicorn...they just completely believe her...

A brutally pummeled Gideon is so furious he angrily threatens Twilight...which turns the crowd against him, forcing him to flee...

(the reason I'm making Mable independent is so she'll be more accepting of Dipper going off and taking Ford's apprenticeship later.)

What do you think?

[Undynlicia]

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Hey, are you okay if I use some of these ideas if I ever write a GF x MLP fanfic?
I will give credit to you of course.
Also if I do get permission I won't be using as many of the more NSFW suggestions, since anything more than an innuendo here or there is not my style.

[The Cowardly Christian]

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go nuts.