My name is Silverstream. The sun hasn't come up for three days now. It's dark. And I am scared. The stars are gone, too. And the moon. I am alone. Alone in the darkness. I need to see if anyone is left. I gotta go. Wish me luck.
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Now there is art again. But soon I won't see it anymore. My flashlight...
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What about it? Wasn't it running on zero battery for days? Did you lose it? Why not use your phone as a flashlight?
Wish we could see your art; or at least know what you drew.
(Apologies to the author. The premise is intriguing, but it's a frustrating read. I trust you won't complain about a handful of comments in sequence when you're posting hundreds of chapters.)
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In this case, the way it keeps vaguely alluding that something is happening, but then never elaborating (often not even finishing the sentence), or showing any subsequent effects or consequences of the thing. It’s partly lack of communication by Silver, and partly ephemerality of the plot/setting.
Using a phone doesn’t in any way imply that you don’t also have a flashlight, especially when you specifically refer to the latter. There’s also no mention of a flashlight in the description; and a description generally isn’t considered part of the story it describes.