Sunset Shimmer finds herself no longer alone in her own body. Questions of identity and morality are only a few of her new concerns as she learns that sometimes, the worst foe lies within the self...
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so a little bit of advice, using descriptions in place of names can be alright in moderation, but you got to make sure that the descriptions you use are distinct to avoid confusion, because making the reader confused is far worse then the monotony of just repeatedly using names. so eye and hair colour can work but not when there's too many similarities, like how there's 2 blonds, or like there's only about 3 eye colours between the 5 characters (both Aya and Rarity are blue and both sunset and Flutters have a fairly similar eye colour)
so other than that, great chapter, can't wait for more.
Maybe one of the dazzlings?
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Well then... First MIST find a supposedly revived and de-aged dead person at a cult gathering that turned into a demon-thing, then they find another unknown person at a revived ARK facility and both have this strange layer of power that isn't neo-mitochondria...... I think some hard questions are about to be asked at Sunset pretty soon.
Thanks for the update, love this story always makes my day when I see it drop. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Nice. Also great use of magic laser.
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I neeeeeds more, we neeeeeeds it precious!
No but seriously, this is absolutely fantastic and wonderful. I am loving every single little bit of this, and it makes me so excited to see more and where you go. I was actually kind of worried when it came to the Dazzlings being mentioned as characters in the tags and them heading to Neo-Ark, with my mind making the connection of NMC/NMH and the whole well, singing thing that the second EVE was big on (second being the one from the Manhattan Blockade Incident, for those not aware or not remembering there was another in the book that came before the game)
I love the attention to detail though of the lore of things you are giving. This feels very, very much like its a Parasite Eve story more than an Equestria Girls one, even with the EQG cast all present.
I am sooooooo sad there isn't more to read now at this point, but I really, really hope that you get another update soon. If ya need a pre-reader, would be happy to help~!
Is another chapter in the works? Please say another chapter is in the works, I long for more of this story![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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Yes, another chapter is in the works
I can't promise when it'll be out but I am already a couple thousand words in so it's at least started
Buddy of mine has the week off so that'll distract a little as we catch up but hopefully shouldn't be too much longer.
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Yay~! Am so excited for the next chapter, it has legitimately been a while since I've been so excited for a fanfic~
decided to follow a whim and read the fight against the Sentient Golem in Chapter 14 with a cover of Red Sun from Metal Gear Rising in the background.
That shit hit different.
What a twist!![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
Interesting development.
On a side note, you’ve spelt the shotgun’s abbreviation wrong. It’s SPAS - Special Purpose Automatic Shotgun not spaz. Although as it’s only referred to as the SP12 in game (I looked it up) it’s a simple mistake to make.