She appeared as if from nowhere, a dark shadowed figure full of dread magic. Shining Armor and Cadance scowled with apprehension, but her attention was on the _other_ shadowy overlord that stood before her. Only one could remain.
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Morning is adorable.
I want to RP as Morning in a DnD game. It would be so fun seeing if others could manage me as well as Umbra manages Morning.
When there is a update notification, but you are on a B-Day party and can't read it
One might wonder if the Alicorn of Darkness get a light bulb moment about pranking opportunities, there is so mutch fun to be had ...
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Is it yours?
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Nope, Kid of my brothers. Got to love the little devils and hate they are worse than Discord before Fluttershy reformed him
Anyway I am finally home and ready to enjoy this chapter
(After reading):
Huh... Adorable little terror ♡
Didn't think my pre-reading comment was so accurate
Poor Starlight Glimmer, she lost her first Shadow Mar plaything so soon
Starlight Glimmer should totally seduce the Lovebug, with puppy eyes and 'please let me join your herd'
Mmm, tasty poison.
While you are technically correct, various alcoholic beverages (in moderation) have positive effects on health.
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The difference between medicine and poison is dosage, let me demonstrate.
I still feel like a number of conflicts in this story are resolved way too quickly and too easily play down the negatively emotional sides of the conflict.
It feels like shifting isn’t really allowed to be “angry” by the story itself. I know if I felt cheated on, even if I happened to agree there were no boundaries set, I would want time to cool off my upset and have a bit of time to myself. Here it seems like Shifting got her 2 minutes of being angry and then back to licking things off her gf. That’s an incredible turn around imho.
Every time there is a conflict brewing it feels like it lasts just long enough for umbra and the conflicting party to get in a room for Umbra to “adult’ for a paragraph or two so the story can move on and it kind of makes a lot of these conflicts feels a bit hollow.
Still enjoying reading of course, and looking forward to more chapters.
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It isn't done.
I did not realize Morning was also known as Monday! X3
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Not the first time that typo tried to sneak past us.
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Yeah, the same could be said about water too when I think on it. What was it? A gallon in a quarter hour or less can kill you? I'm too lazy to google it right now...
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Look, don't get me started on the whole di-hydrogen monoxide filth they shove on us.
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If you're angry at your special someone for cheating on you, be original, cheat on them with their lover!
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While alcohol does function as the antidote for certain poisons, it is actually not true that it is generally good for one's health in moderation.
Yeah not a fan of what Umbra did. Shows that the gender change did not solve her issues