A girl by the name of Sarah let an old man into her home, in exchange for her kindness he gave her a yellow raincoat that would change her life forever.
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Have you ever noticed that canonically Discord never breaks his toys? As in, he doesn't kill. That's because he know that the death is a highest form of order and he's chaos. Killing is the very last thing on his list to do any day or night. You made him kill casually here and for no reason whatsoever. Even your version of Discord took over Canterlot and princesses couldn't do anything about that, but now your character needs an army for some reason and killing guards whose job is literally to keep shit in a reasonable boundaries.
Her power grab will leave entire country in shambles and turn into extension of hell. Unless that's her goal, but isn't she trying to turn the rotten world she end up in for the better? If so then how killing military and police forces of the country helps with that? Oh, yes, it's a show of force, but so is capturing them alive. That would be even bigger show of force without sowing more hatred and grief for no particular reason.
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You gave me an idea that I will implement.