A girl by the name of Sarah let an old man into her home, in exchange for her kindness he gave her a yellow raincoat that would change her life forever.
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I kind of want to see what the other Ponies are up to after Discord got eaten
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I will do something for Chapter 8 about that then. Chapter 7 is already part way through.
And now, after a chapter where she created galaxies out of nothing we get a chapter where she takes control over street gangs. What exactly stops her from teleport them all at once to herself with a single snap? What stops her from changing them as she see fit with another? Yes, Discord can warp mind too, so why not use it for something good for once? In fact, why she can't (and haven't even tried as it seems) to alter herself to stop feeling constantly hungry? She got the power of a local god, scolded him for not looking into possibilities of using it and now doesn't use it herself... because that would be too convenient, wouldn't it?
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You are giving me a lot to think about.
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That's the problem of having too much power. You can't make a good story out of it unless you move focus away from the power and concentrate on something different like everyday life, for example. Something, where all this power is completely useless and can't help to solve much.