A zebra hunter seeks the ultimate prey; beautiful mares. Reduced from trophy wife to mere trophy, Fleur de Lis has already been captured, but can his latest target evade him? And who is the other, mysterious female zebra who runs the plains?
Ahhh, the egotistical hunter, always looking for his next prize. A classic characture. Wonder how Bea and Fluer will make it out of this one without giving into that haughty demeanour~
10907224 Been reading tons of Spiderman comics to relive my childhood, and figured a Kraven the Hunter character would be a cool addition to my lore. Plus I used to get tons of requests for a zebra story, and I finally decided to experiment with that!
Alright great premise!
Very nice, this looks good.
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Thanks!
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Thank you!
Not my style but good work still.
And that is similar to candy's orginal Story
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Thank you, your backstory for Candy was actually one of the inspirations for this.
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Youre welcome...i guess...
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Just taken back by surprise
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Always looking for inspiration, sometimes I find it in unexpected places!
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Fair point. Pardon, i just get very sympathic for the victims in such stories.
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Understandable, I like writing dark stuff but Beatrix will try and make it better as always!
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Glad to hear it. Just won't candy suffer, okay?
Ahhh, the egotistical hunter, always looking for his next prize. A classic characture. Wonder how Bea and Fluer will make it out of this one without giving into that haughty demeanour~
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Don't worry, I try to treat guest OCs how their creator wants.
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Been reading tons of Spiderman comics to relive my childhood, and figured a Kraven the Hunter character would be a cool addition to my lore. Plus I used to get tons of requests for a zebra story, and I finally decided to experiment with that!
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Thank you. She really doesn't deserve such a fate
Whoooooa, this is so well written!
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Thank you! Tried really hard on this one, sadly I was pretty ill for the last couple chapters but hopefully they turned out okay!
awesome chapter