Great work keep it up

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Thanks I will, I hope that the second chapter will be finished by the end of next week.

This is one of those rare situations where I will comment, and it is to tell you to find an editor/proofreader. I haven’t read the story, and that is entirely due to the quality of the summary, or teaser.

I love the premise, but the sheer number of misspelled words and grammatical errors turned me away immediately.

I don’t mean this to be hurtful, only helpful; first impressions count for a lot. If you can’t find an editor/proofreader, then at least try to run it through an autocorrect program like grammarly.

Don’t let this dissuade you, and if you fix the errors in this story then I might give it a read.

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First of all, thank you for your tip.
My native language is not English and I struggle a bit with grammar.

Again, thank you for your advice.

Eh

I like it! i hope to see more of this.

Finally. I can’t wait for more. This is one of my favorite types of Vore and possession. Unfortunately there is so little of it. And then you come along.

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There will be more, I can promise you that