Hypnotized Fluttershy

by firebirdabirdoffire

Chapter 6 - Day 2 - Randomish Stuff (Soon to be edited)

Fluttershy woke up and did her daily animal related routine, and went to the park where she decided to spend the day 'What am I going to do?' thought Fluttershy to herself lying on a park bench 'I still feel good because of that 'suggestion' Rainbow gave me and I should be feeling worried, well I still am I just feel happy about it? Why of all words did Rarity pick 'hay'?' she questioned 'Well maybe she referred the 'hello hey' a phrase she never used?' Fluttershy could have gone on and on about it. But a Aeropean Hoofball(?) hit her so hard in the head she was knocked off the bench, she was lying on her back on the ground now.

"Oh no! We hit somepony! Let's make a run for it!" Said the leader of the 'Tough-Colts (and Filly) Three' (pointless original charaters? Sue me)

"Are ya kidding?" said the filly who's the only reasonable member "That's Fluttershy, she wouldn't hurt fly ya idiot"

"'Hey!'" said the leader "Well you're... INSANE!" this kid tried to be clever with his vocabulary with his comeback (he must be the author) "Anyway let's run nonetheless, we will get the ball back later, it has Hoppy's adres on it, they can complain to his parents"

"Jerk" the second 'Hoppy' colt deadpanned

Rainbow Dash who saw everything so far (spying on Fluttershy from cloud for either her new pranking ways or for any other interests, your call) "Ohmygosh, Ohmygosh Fluttershy are you okay?" said Rainbow Dash hesitantly as she was flying above her

Fluttershy opened her eyes, they had a crazy look to them, and hopped right back on her hooves like there was know "Well RD I never felt better" she said with a Crazy grin, with a big bump her head and slightly bruised back

Rainbow was freaked out on so many levels, the face, the tone, body language, calling her RD, the fact she didn't seem phased by the pain "Are ya sure, your body seem to be in pain"

"It's does?" Fluttershocked and confused she took a peek at her back "Well now that you mention OW-OW pain OOOooooow Ow pain it hurts" she deadpanned but she really seemed in pain

"I think ya got brain damage, let's take you to Twilight, maybe she can fix it" she said concerned I think the hospital would be effective... maybe later

"No I don't want any desk lantern on my buffalo sandwich, Ice Cream" said Fluttershy pointed at RD with a scared tone, but with a straight face as she saw a fire dragon made out of ice cream, wearing a desk lantern T-shirt, holding a plate with a sandwich with a flag with the word 'buffalo' instead of Rainbow Dash

"Uh... sure... just climb on my back?..." not sure what she was talking about, she raised her wings so she could lie on her back, for her ride to the library and then she got stared

Fluttershy looked angry probably heard her wrong: "Uh... sure... just climb on my back?..." climb on a dragon's back... smart idea, at least her sense of hearing was unaffected (because that's how insanity works, Clearly >.>)

Rainbow walked slowly closer to lift her up herself. Flutter backed of with alternating between angry, shy, afraid and some other emotions that are pretty much the same as those three "Just... just climb on my back..."

Fluttershy was now more scared of the dragon then anything anything else, flew away as fast as she could but something was wrong... that sky was exactly the colour it was suposed to be, except green

"Fluttershy!" said the ice cream dragon as it chased after Fluttershy, and they had a chase scene rght out of those old 'Rainbow & Pinkie' cartoons except no violence (more then usual), traps, Fluttershy instead of Pinkie and roles reversed (I have no idea where I was going with this analogy), they chased for at least 10 minutes, which is too long for RD's taste, but for Fluttershy she would carry on, she needed treatment apparently, they went from the park, Ponyville square, outskirts, everfree and Sweet Apple Acres needless to say a lot of pony saw them, and they became more scared/motivated and tired, Rainbow had to stop/catch up to Fluttershy "'Hey' Fluttershy [i']stop flying away'"

Fluttershy wings stopped flapping and were in a not position to glide to safety, in fact she fell straight down "AAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!" Rainbow Dash could not brake easily and did not see that coming, and did not see were she Fluttershy fell because of the high speed braking, quite a few citizens saw this

Rainbow started the search for Fluttershy and asked some ponies who had free time to waste (and of course they didn't see where she crashed, why would it be any other way?), and looked for her for the of the day, Rainbow looked around on Ponyville aerial and could not find Fluttershy anywhere, asked a few ponies to help looking for her including: Twilight and Pinkie... and could not find Fluttershy anywhere... again

"Twi have you seen her?"

"No couldn't she wasn't in her cottage"

"Ok, Pinkie?"

"Nope" shook head as had her trademarked happiness being Pinkie and all

"How could ya not find her? When you go looking for me, you find me instantly!"

"Well duh! Isn't it obvious? I was not in a chase scene with her" she said it the most sincerity, as if it was completely logical

*Confuzzled/annoyed face* "Well... nevermind" said Twilight trying to make sense of Pinkie's statement

*sigh* "I hope she's ok, she got hit on the head pretty bad" the speedster sounded concerned " and started spouted nonsense angrily scared, something about a dragon, while she was pointing at me..."

"Did she bleed?"

"What!" shock face "Oh no, just few bruises" she calmly said "What if she did? Brain damage?" concern

"Well that is a possible outcome, maybe she just got hit right on a nerve, and because of that she is seeing the world all twisted?" Twilight reasoned the total plausible of solutions

"Wow that makes a lot of sense Twilight" said the ever pink Pinkie reminding you that she was there

"I'm just guessing here, Anyway it's getting late, Rainbow can you tell the rest to stop looking"

And she flew off with a face that is sad

"Poor Fluttershy" said ms. Sparkle "That ball to her head had most likely diminished her new found confidence even more" on her to the library

"Don't feel so bad you barely had anything to do with it, and hey who knows maybe Flutters feels like herself now" hopping to way to Sugarcube Corner

"Who knows"

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Somewhere in an alley Twi and Pinks were passing "Um... why is it so suddenly dark in here? Where am I? And why does it feel like I'm stuck headfirst in a garbage can? I hope that dragon isn't chasing me anymore... and who will feed that animals?" Fluttershy panicked her self to sleep with a few tears

Author's Note:

My terrible writing style shines trough, in a few chapters a chance is going to happen with a thought out story, but not much.
and in case you are wondering why this chapter and future ones are late, blame this sites stories, Team Fortress 2, LoZ Phantom Hourglass, Youtube, etc. so excuse me if there is an in-excusable case
Thanks for reading

Comments

[firebirdabirdoffire]

This story is on haitus, why? I can't make any thing of it... I will return to this story once I have better ideas. That and I regret putting Fluttershy in the lead role, it should have been Rarity, Applejack or Rainbow... I apologize

[LooneyToon1990]

1494365 Why not side stories of all three??? Just a thought, or maybe just mini stories, enough to do one for each member of the Mane Six?^^

[firebirdabirdoffire]

1933877 mmm... I'll consider, but it another story though. Not sure if I can finish this story. There is another story in the works already.

[Mane 6]

This should continue, there are not enough hypnosis fanfics on the site.
In other news there were A LOT of errors in the first few chapters.
Hope to see more!

[firebirdabirdoffire]

2155123 It's not completely dead, every once in a while i go back to writing this story. But don't expect a new chapter anytime soon. I'm writing something else right now. Glad you seem to enjoy it BTW.