Why one chapter when you can have two? Hope you enjoy them! Also thank you for the complement on the name powers and appearance. I thought long and hard on how Alucard and Alicornian where to look and would so like someone to do a cover art and an image for the first chapter for this fiction. Hmm, hey if anyone is interested PM me. How the two look are in the stories but I would like to have the two back to back or side to side hold their weapons up with Alicornian smiling at the audience while Alucard is looking off to the distance as if looking at a memory and well the picture for chapter 1 would be Dracula's picture at the very end of the chapter. Interested PM me please!
Alicornian, again I think that the walls of text are giving your readers a hard time. Try to correct them. You have a nice story, but the bigger chapters are hard to read because everything looks so... I don't know, tiresome to read. Continue with the great story, but try to work to improve around that.
Wow your right, after I looked it over I mean. Thank you for pointing this out. I'll try to edit this myself and try and spread out the text a bit better. For now my editor is on my other fiction called The Legacy Saga Part 1: Legacy's Survival and personally i rather not put to much on him at the moment so I'll do what I can to edit this myself for now. Thanks for letting me know.
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Okay I hope this did it. If not keep letting me know.
Now everything is ok . You have a editor? I envy you. I am suffering to write in a language tha'ts not my first and I don't have one! Anyway keep up with the great story, I will take a peek at your other work when I have time
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Why one chapter when you can have two? Hope you enjoy them!
Also thank you for the complement on the name powers and appearance.
I thought long and hard on how Alucard and Alicornian where to look and would so like someone to do a cover art and an image for the first chapter for this fiction. Hmm, hey if anyone is interested PM me. How the two look are in the stories but I would like to have the two back to back or side to side hold their weapons up with Alicornian smiling at the audience while Alucard is looking off to the distance as if looking at a memory and well the picture for chapter 1 would be Dracula's picture at the very end of the chapter. Interested PM me please! ![:pinkiesad2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesad2.png)
Alicornian, again I think that the walls of text are giving your readers a hard time. Try to correct them.![:applejackconfused:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/applejackconfused.png)
![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
You have a nice story, but the bigger chapters are hard to read because everything looks so... I don't know, tiresome to read.
Continue with the great story, but try to work to improve around that.
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Wow your right, after I looked it over I mean.
Thank you for pointing this out. I'll try to edit this myself and try and spread out the text a bit better. For now my editor is on my other fiction called The Legacy Saga Part 1: Legacy's Survival and personally i rather not put to much on him at the moment so I'll do what I can to edit this myself for now. Thanks for letting me know.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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Okay I hope this did it. If not keep letting me know.
Now everything is ok
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![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
You have a editor? I envy you. I am suffering to write in a language tha'ts not my first and I don't have one!
Anyway keep up with the great story, I will take a peek at your other work when I have time
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Thanks. Oh and I recommend the group Looking for Editors You can find an editor or proof-reader there.