Sweetie Belle has joined her older sister and father on their bi-annual cruise ship vacation! She'll get to participate in a great father-daughter bonding experience! But there's strange 'plapping' sounds coming from her father's cabin...?
That whole harem/infidelity/international law thing kinda ruined it for me, especially since it was later contrasted with the whole thing being perfectly normal and wide spread. Apart from that pretty good!
“H-hey!” Hondo gulped, “Rarity, honey… if Sweetie isn’t ready… if she doesn’t want this… you have to back off. I knew this wasn’t a good idea!” Hondo’s mumbling blush made him hard to hear, quite unlike his usual, boisterous self. “Little Sweetie is still just a filly, we shouldn’t have sprung this on her.”
Which is it? Does she have a choice or is she still a foal til she gets bucked by family? If this was truly a cultural norm you would be raising them with the expectation of this. Hiding it says it is a niche thing. Hiding it speaks of human views on sex which is quite contrary to what was described.
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That whole harem/infidelity/international law thing kinda ruined it for me, especially since it was later contrasted with the whole thing being perfectly normal and wide spread. Apart from that pretty good!
Sweety get the ride of her life next chapter ♡
Er, no. It's "discreet" - the one used means "individually separate and distinct", not "careful and prudent".
Nice lore dump
Next we will enjoy a cum dump
Which is it? Does she have a choice or is she still a foal til she gets bucked by family? If this was truly a cultural norm you would be raising them with the expectation of this. Hiding it says it is a niche thing. Hiding it speaks of human views on sex which is quite contrary to what was described.
Magnificent reading, clop with worldbuilding.
Nice
This is where the fun begins ~♡