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It's been four weeks?
4 weeks is how long it'd take him to write 1 word 60,000 times and without breaks save for eating, drinking, and sleeping.
You can't recall 60,000 individual words in 4 YEARS.
Is this guy a few thousand years old in his dimension because he's just casually throwing around tens of thousands of words like it's easy.
I love the idea of bringing advanced technology and or unique magic to an outdated equestria but that's kind of immersion breaking.
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There's more than a million words in the English language in total. Around 170,000 words are in current use in modern day and around 20,000 - 30,000 people use daily. The author stated the MC enjoyed runes before he came here so it's not totally outside the realm of possibility that he created a 60,000 word Runic language. It's less than half of words used in modern English.
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That's for the entire human race.
He'd have to know every single piece of technical jargon in the world, that's still a monumental task, it's not impossible, no, but it's a task for a hundred year old master, not to be thrown around lightly.
You need to slow down a lot mate. Your story is fine so far but your pacing is terrible. To fast, to quick.
You need to break the events of your story into different scenes and sections. You are pretty much just skipping your own story to get to the good part.