You let out a puff of air and stood up on your feet, walking out of your room. He peaked around the corner to make sure Twilight wasn't nearby and quickly stormed downstairs, walking towards the exit.
You went from second person to third person perspective in the breath of two sentences. That’s confusing.
10653371 Thanks for pointing that out, it's fixed. It's a habit of mine to write in third person. I usually try to catch myself, but sometimes it slips past.
It would be HILARIOUS if it turned out that Anon didn't have any 'magical attraction effect' but that mares simply dug his pheromones that much... and that Twilight could not be 'taken in' by them because she is asexual.
Comment posted by Shanenator deleted Feb 3rd, 2021
That's what you call public indecency charge
If those existed
Which they don't
Also eight inches circumference?! That's like the size of a small dinner plate! No wonder she came so much!
You went from second person to third person perspective in the breath of two sentences. That’s confusing.
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Thanks for pointing that out, it's fixed. It's a habit of mine to write in third person. I usually try to catch myself, but sometimes it slips past.
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Eight inch circumference is a ~2.5 inch diameter. Unreasonable, but a long way shy of a dinner plate.
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Oh my bad
I'm not good at math
It would be HILARIOUS if it turned out that Anon didn't have any 'magical attraction effect' but that mares simply dug his pheromones that much... and that Twilight could not be 'taken in' by them because she is asexual.