i like this story i cant wait to read more

Thanks again Knight for another amazing chapter. I wish you the best of luck with your next one, and as always have fun writing.

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thanks mate got the next 13 chapters planned

Wonderful seeing you back keep it up I enjoy this story.....maybe quicker updates? Lol good chapter anyways

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glad you like it. Trying to go as fast as my dyslexic brain can go while writing other things haha

Everything’s great so far, but maybe use Grammarly

besides the grammar mistakes, it is a great story so far

beautiful story so far, quite interested in more

Regardless of the grammar and punctuation mistakes, I quite like this story so far.

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coughing blood that almost sounds like leukemia

.....i certainly hope that's not the case