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Aside from a couple grammar and spelling mistakes. A great story so far definently looking forward to more.
This looks like it could be a pretty great story would love to see where it will go.
I would have to reread the whole thing it's very minor things like a letter switched here and there nothing crazy. Great story so far by the way I know I said that but it's worth saying twice
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Thanks I'll have a check after chapter 3
i like this story i cant wait to read more
Thanks again Knight for another amazing chapter. I wish you the best of luck with your next one, and as always have fun writing.
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thanks mate got the next 13 chapters planned
Wonderful seeing you back keep it up I enjoy this story.....maybe quicker updates? Lol good chapter anyways
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glad you like it. Trying to go as fast as my dyslexic brain can go while writing other things haha
Everything’s great so far, but maybe use Grammarly
besides the grammar mistakes, it is a great story so far
beautiful story so far, quite interested in more
Good Chatter I give it a 10 of 11
Osowiec then and again
Attack of the dead hundred man
Facing the lead once again
Hundred man, charge again, die again
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was wondering how long it would be before anyone mentioned that.
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When you listen to Sabaton, there is this fire that makes you comment the lyrics
I'ma adds this to my favorite for later, thank you.
Uhhh
I have finally found it. The story of pony reaction to the war. The only war. The Great War.
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don't worry their will be more, a lot more reactions.
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Hey I know it’s your story but I want them to know the FULL scale of the war like how Air Force pilots had a life expectancy of 11 days or less.
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I prefer the black adder version why are they called the 20 minuters? because the average life span of a new pilot is 20 minutes. but their will be more facts and reactions.
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Good!
Punctuation and proper capitalization, have you heard of it? Get eine editor.
Well, that's a nice dinner table conversation.
I'll be watching this one.
Excellent new Chatter I'm looking forward to the next chapter
I wonder if there will a be a moment to where they show him a map and he's like "By...God..." cuz its the land and the borders are so close to what his world is like.
Damn now I REALLY WANT for rainbow to ask about the royal fliers.
He not a conjoined twin the only natural way so he could have a disease cardiomyopathy but that's highly unlikely.
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you'll get your wish soon enough along with a lot more questions. Twilight's character wouldn't feel right if she didn't asked a million questions a day.
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Hmmmm I wonder what he’ll do once they all figure out how bad of a war it is.
Good chapter can’t wait for the next one
You desperately need an editor, my dude. The story itself is solid, but the grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors make it so hard to read that it's not fun anymore.
You put Lesson instead of listened or a another word entirely, but either way will Luna be able to go through the door now?
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I know I need an editor, I put up a post but no one replied. I'm glad you like the story so far for all my dyslexic mistakes.
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she will at somepoint.
(sorry for my horrible grammar and spelling)
Holy crap this is a HUGE chapter! No wonder it took so long to post. When you took a month to post this I freaked out lol. It will make me happy if you make this story long as well :D. Makes me sad that some most great stories are incomplete. Hope I'm not pressuring you, anyways take all the time you need you did a great job making chapter aside from a few grammar mistakes.
Also I have a question, do you plan on making the next chapters as long as this?
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glad you liked it, and yes the next chapter will be a long one. I know what you mean, their are so many good fanfics that just stop.
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Alright thanks man
Good work on the story so far, it really captures how hard it is for David to cope with what he went through during the Great War. The only issue that I have with the story is the punctuation, I understand that maybe you might be in a rush with the typing and that going back and revising is a hassle. Just don’t worry about the quantity, worry more about the quality in your work. I’m sure that everyone is willing to wait just a little longer for you to go over things. Anyways, just keep up the good work and I look forward to the upcoming chapters as well.
Hmm great chapter can't wait for David to beat up some changelings when he comes to the canterlot wedding.
(punctuation man...... but I can deal with it)
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Glad your liking it. Shellshock was always something interesting in war movies to me, some men would go mad, screaming, crying or freezing up, while other men could get through it until they stopped and had nothing to distract them. As for my punctuation I'm dyslexic so that's going to be an on going problem but I'm trying to spot the errors. My last chapter kept me up until half one in the morning as I wanted to get it out. haha
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working on that, might need to rewatch that episode.
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Yeah don't forget Chrysalis as well. Wonder what would happen to David once twilight goes ham saying that Cadence is evil.
This is gorgeous. I'm loving this story. There's a few grammatical errors but they don't affect the story all that much.
You should be proud of yourself, this has got to be one of the sweetest stories I've read. I feel you've captured PTSD rather well and the first world war was bad, especially for those who returned home.
Good work.
Really liking the story so far it’s wonderful well paced and some punctuation errors but small enough for my mind to auto correct into what it’s meant to be. Can’t wait to see more!
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Thank you, I'm glad your liking it. More sweet bits to come for them especially later on.