David Mason was rifleman in the trench's of the great war, after surviving three years of war he must learn to live in equestria while overcoming shellshock with a pony that has regrets to princess Luna.
I would have to reread the whole thing it's very minor things like a letter switched here and there nothing crazy. Great story so far by the way I know I said that but it's worth saying twice
Aside from a couple grammar and spelling mistakes. A great story so far definently looking forward to more.
This looks like it could be a pretty great story would love to see where it will go.
I would have to reread the whole thing it's very minor things like a letter switched here and there nothing crazy. Great story so far by the way I know I said that but it's worth saying twice
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Thanks I'll have a check after chapter 3
another great chapter another job well done