from a long journey through space, a ship comes soaring in through the darkness, and from that ship a pod, and from that…a mechanical dog. Set loose on a lone planet to discover what this new world has to offer
Okay apparently this story's author replied to a comment I made here and I realized it had a typo what I meant to say was it is a great idea of me to put this one in my tracking list so I'd be updated of new and cool stuff okay just want that to get out of my noggin sorry 'bout that. Anyways into the next exciting chapter of clearly this was set in season 1 of the tv show aaaand imma shut mah yap now... toodles!😅
Nice job dude.
With the word crowed, change it to crowd, because the word crowed is the sound of a crow. Crowd is what your looking for in the context.
Lovely chapter though
Okay apparently this story's author replied to a comment I made here and I realized it had a typo what I meant to say was it is a great idea of me to put this one in my tracking list so I'd be updated of new and cool stuff okay just want that to get out of my noggin sorry 'bout that. Anyways into the next exciting chapter of clearly this was set in season 1 of the tv show aaaand imma shut mah yap now... toodles!😅