from a long journey through space, a ship comes soaring in through the darkness, and from that ship a pod, and from that…a mechanical dog. Set loose on a lone planet to discover what this new world has to offer
It would really be interesting to see the amount of objects, writing, painting, and tools left in the castle of the sisters, to be discovered by "luky" and to clearly reevaluate the attempt to colonize a planet inhabited by another civilization. just say.
The noise was so shrilling and loud anything within a couple of yards could hear it!
Just my opinion, but 2 yards is only 6 feet... so a tall persons body length. Perhaps you meant a couple hundred yards? Or perhaps a couple miles? Anything less wouldn't be very loud... unless it's some type of directed short range audio attack? I mean it could be.
It was a good idea of me to place this story under my watch list for updates, so please author, do keep up the great work and effort here. This is looking to be something awesome I'm sure... will there be space fights here like in the tv show The Expanse tho? What sci-fi goodies does Johnny have?
10821117 i won't go into many details as not to spoil any readers, but there aren't any space ship battles planned. as for gear, you'll get to see in the newest chapters i have in draft.
It would really be interesting to see the amount of objects, writing, painting, and tools left in the castle of the sisters, to be discovered by "luky" and to clearly reevaluate the attempt to colonize a planet inhabited by another civilization. just say.
Is ot just me, or is picturing two anthro guards in armour pulling a chariot kinda weird.
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well, its not like they have any tamed flying beast they can use to pull chariots.
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Still seems like it'd be pretty demeaning to the guards.
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it's the Equestrian guards............-_-
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oh, right, case closed then. XD
Possible typo, maybe...
Just my opinion, but 2 yards is only 6 feet... so a tall persons body length. Perhaps you meant a couple hundred yards? Or perhaps a couple miles? Anything less wouldn't be very loud... unless it's some type of directed short range audio attack? I mean it could be.
in any event, enjoyable :)
It was a good idea of me to place this story under my watch list for updates, so please author, do keep up the great work and effort here. This is looking to be something awesome I'm sure... will there be space fights here like in the tv show The Expanse tho? What sci-fi goodies does Johnny have?
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i won't go into many details as not to spoil any readers, but there aren't any space ship battles planned. as for gear, you'll get to see in the newest chapters i have in draft.
Wait... Hand? Twilight has a hand? Did I miss an "Anthro" tag or something?
Edit: Yes, I did in fact miss the Antro tag. And I was starting to get invested, too.