Its always hard to make the right decision in such Situations, nice work! You missed a " i noticed.

“Well, darling, from what I’ve heard.” Rarity shivered at her own thoughts on the matter. “I hope it’s something that’s nothing to worry about, but sicknesses are nothing to scoff at.” She dropped some bits in a jar on Applejack’s stall. “If this sickness is going around, I do believe it would be best to transfer Twilight’s care to one of our homes until it blows over. Just in case it comes to Ponyville.

And while reading...i kinda got a silly thought.

But interesting equestria has trucks here

11675159
Thanks will change that 😆.
Yeah imagine 1920 style vehicles.

11675365
Youre welcome and okay. The thought, you really wanna know?