nice work! i saw some errors but will point them out later, as i am busy, if its okay. and i wonder, is hanzal as "new recruit" wear armor,, like costum made, or just pretends to be a soldier?

and...luna, oh dear

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Better all to know so they can worry about other things.

whar i noticed

Ringing screamed in her ears as she stared into the room. She could barely make out her brother calling out to her, the only sounds were the wind blowing through the window and the door squealing as it moved into the fully opened position. “?” She felt her brother shoving her.

that question mark looks out of place

“Spitfire nodded. “I understand.” She led them out of the house. Stepping onto the porch, a pleasant shiver danced across Twilight’s back, easing the stress that flowed through her, lifting a few weights off her shoulders. “Blaze, we’re ready to go!” Spitfire shouted as she skipped onto the pathway that led to the house.

The mare smiled. “It is I…” Twilight pulled her into a death grip of a hug, startling her. Zhe let out a laugh and returned the hug. “Oh, dearest Twilight.”

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Will take a look

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Okay